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You have purchased some goods from a company and the goods were supposed to be delivered within three days of purchase. Seven days have already gone and you have not received the products yet. Write a letter to a company manager with whom you arranged the delivery of goods. In your letter: inform him/her what items you have purchased ask the reason for the delay in delivery suggest what can be done about the matter

You have purchased some goods from a company and the goods were supposed to be delivered within three days of purchase. Seven days have already gone and you have not received the products yet. Write a letter to a company manager with whom you arranged the delivery of goods. In your letter: inform him/her what items you have purchased ask the reason for the delay in delivery suggest what can be done about the matter Qew9
Dear Sir / Madam, This letter is written to enquire about an ordered product unable to get delivered yet. I have ordered a mobile phone Redmi note 6 dated 21/11/20 and it was expected to deliver on 24/11/20, but it's been 7 days and the mentioned purchase has not been delivered to date. It's disappointing for me as I needed it soon because I lost my previous one accidentally. I ordered it from your website especially trusting on your delivery criteria which is always on time. I would like to know the reason behind this delay in delivering. Lastly, Being a regular customer of your company, I would like to wait 2 days maximum for my purchase otherwise, I have to cancel it. I will contact my bank to reverse the credit card payment if I do not hear back from you in regards to this within a day. Thank you for giving the matter your attention and I hope to hear your reply soon Yours faithfully, Michael Keaton
Dear Sir / Madam,

This letter
is written
to
Possible spelling mistake. 'enquire' is British English.
enquire
about an ordered product unable to
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get
delivered
yet
.

I have ordered a mobile phone
Possible spelling mistake found.
Redmi
note 6 dated 21/11/20 and it was
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
expected
to deliver on 24/11/20,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
it's been 7 days and the mentioned
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchase
has not
been delivered
to date.

It's disappointing for me as I needed it
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
I lost my previous one
accidentally
. I ordered it from your website
especially
trusting on your delivery criteria which is always on time. I would like to know the reason behind this delay in delivering.

Lastly
, Being a regular customer of your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
, I would like to wait 2 days maximum for my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchase
otherwise
, I
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
cancel it. I will contact my bank to reverse the credit card payment if I do not hear back from you
Use "in regard to", "with regard to", or more simply "regarding".
in regards to
this within a day.

Thank you for giving the matter your attention and I hope to hear your reply
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon


Yours
faithfully
,

Michael Keaton

IELTS letter You have purchased some goods from a company and the goods were supposed to be delivered within three days of purchase. Seven days have already gone and you have not received the products yet. Write a letter to a company manager with whom you arranged the delivery of goods. In your letter: inform him/her what items you have purchased ask the reason for the delay in delivery suggest what can be done about the matter

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  American English
8 paragraphs
168 words
6.0
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