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Friend is staying at your place, share tips and assign few daily task

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Dear Anna, Hope you are doing wonderful! Thank you for again agreeing to stay at my house while I am away for the planned business trip. It would be nice if you could do couple of things during your stay. Couple of months back I have changed my place as it was getting difficult to travel to work. Now I am put up at North Street just opposite to Jitters Café. Once you are off Central City subway, a straight bus (201) will get you to the Café, exactly the other side you will see my apartment. It would be great if you can water the plants that I placed in the balcony. Also, there is a maintenance work going on in our building and you may face some plumbing problem in bathroom. Although I have registered a complaint to the secretary, you would still need to contact them for easy fix; you will find a sticky note on fridge. I am sure you will be getting few of your favorite books to accompany you but still I would recommend you Jitters Café and the new museum that is just two street across. Call me if you need anything. I am sure you will love staying here.
Dear Anna,

Hope you are doing wonderful!

Thank you for again agreeing to stay at my
house
while I am away for the planned business trip. It would be nice if you could do
couple of
things during your stay.

Couple of months back I have
changed
my place as it was getting difficult to travel to work.
Now
I
am put
up at North Street
just
opposite to Jitters Café. Once you are off Central City subway, a straight bus (201) will
get
you to the Café, exactly the other side you will
see
my apartment.

It would be great if you can water the plants that I placed in the balcony.
Also
, there is a maintenance work going on in our building and you may face
some
plumbing problem in bathroom. Although I have registered a complaint to the secretary, you would
still
need to contact them for easy
fix
; you will find a sticky note on fridge.

I am sure you will be getting few of your favorite books to accompany you
but
still
I would recommend you Jitters Café and the new museum
that is
just
two street across.

Call me if you need anything. I am sure you will
love
staying here.
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IELTS letter Friend is staying at your place, share tips and assign few daily task

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