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Friend is staying at your place, share tips and assign few daily task

Friend is staying at your place, share tips and assign few daily task pReyD

Dear Anna, Hope you are doing wonderful! Thank you for again agreeing to stay at my house while I am away for the planned business trip. It would be nice if you could do couple of things during your stay. Couple of months back I have changed my place as it was getting difficult to travel to work. Now I am put up at North Street just opposite to Jitters Café. Once you are off Central City subway, a straight bus (201) will get you to the Café, exactly the other side you will see my apartment. It would be great if you can water the plants that I placed in the balcony. Also, there is a maintenance work going on in our building and you may face some plumbing problem in bathroom. Although I have registered a complaint to the secretary, you would still need to contact them for easy fix; you will find a sticky note on fridge. I am sure you will be getting few of your favorite books to accompany you but still I would recommend you Jitters Café and the new museum that is just two street across. Call me if you need anything. I am sure you will love staying here.

Dear Anna,

Hope you are doing wonderful!

Thank you for again agreeing to stay at my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 while I am away for the planned business trip. It would be nice if you could do It seems that an article is missing.a couple of
couple of
 things during your stay.

Couple of months back I have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 my place as it was getting difficult to travel to work. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
Now
 I am put
 up at North Street This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 opposite to Jitters Café. Once you are off Central City subway, a straight bus (201) will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 you to the Café, exactly the other side you will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 my apartment.

It would be great if you can water the plants that I placed in the balcony. Also
, there is a maintenance work going on in our building and you may face This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 plumbing problem in bathroom. Although I have registered a complaint to the secretary, you would still
 need to contact them for easy This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :rectify
fix
; you will find a sticky note on fridge.

I am sure you will be getting few of your favorite books to accompany you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
still
 I would recommend you Jitters Café and the new museum that is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 two street across.

Call me if you need anything. I am sure you will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 staying here. 

IELTS letter Friend is staying at your place, share tips and assign few daily task

Letter

American English

7 paragraphs

207 words

6.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 6.5

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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