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You recently bought an expensive electronic product from a store, and found that the product does not work properly. Write a letter to the store manager. In your letter, Complain about the problem Propose action for the store to take Request confirmation that this is agreed

You recently bought an expensive electronic product from a store, and found that the product does not work properly. Write a letter to the store manager. In your letter, Complain about the problem Propose action for the store to take Request confirmation that this is agreed q2a5

Dear Mr/ Madam’ I have been a satisfied customer for several years, but I am writing regarding the product that I recently bought to your store, which is 60 inches flat screen television. The volume button is not partially working, as a result this problem caused a lot of wasted time and money to travel the electronic product to my location. I therefore request that you replaced the product immediately, or send a professional electronic technician to resolve the problem. Let me know what action you will taken, because I am only available on Monday next week. May you reply to this email to confirm you agreed to the conditions that I made. Thank you for your attention to this important matter Kind Regards Jay Ryan Arbiz

Dear Mr/ Madam’

I have been a satisfied customer for several years, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 I am writing regarding the product that I recently This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
 to your store, which is Writing for an international audience? Consider adding the metric equivalent.60 inches (1.52 m)60 inches (1.52 meters)60 inches (ca. 152 cm)60 inches (152.4 cm)60 inches (ca. 152 centimeters)60 inches (152.4 centimeters)
60 inches
 flat screen television. The volume button is not partially
 working, as a result
 this problem caused This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 wasted time and money to travel the electronic product to my location.

I therefore
 request that you replaced the product immediately, or This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
send
 a professional electronic technician to resolve the problem.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
Let
 me know what action you will Did you mean "take" or "be taken"?takebe taken
taken
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 I am This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 available on Monday next
 week.

May you reply to this email to confirm you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesced
agreed
 to the conditions that I made.

Thank you for your attention to this This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 matter

Kind Regards

Jay Ryan Possible spelling mistake found.ArizAr biz
Arbiz