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A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/She has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday, describe some possible disadvantages, say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer.

A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/She has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday, describe some possible disadvantages, say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer. DkYA
Dear Mich, I hope all is well, I’m glad to know that you are intending to go for a camping holiday in the upcoming summer, also thank you for taking me into confidence for some advice. I think you should take the opportunity and make it this adventurous summer. I think that you should go for a camping holiday because from my past camping experience, I can say that you will enjoy it. After all, this camping holiday will offer you the opportunity to take a long walk in the desert and observe nature in its true habitat. You can also go to a nearby seaside for fishing or swimming which you have always wanted to do. I believe this activity will be good stress reliever in considering your high-tension workplace in our construction site. You are be in a fresh air and natural environment away from noisy equipment and messy workplace. However, I must warn you of a few imperfections of camping. Firstly, is the weather since you are going to summer it can get extremely hot during the camping. The other concern is you will be sharing bathrooms with other people at the campsite and dealing with insects. Finally, I would like to join you on the trip it’s been a long time for me since we went on a trip together also this can be good bonding exercise. Take care and stay safe. Regards, Eugene
Dear Mich,

I hope all is well, I’m glad to know that you are intending to go for a camping holiday in the upcoming summer,
also
thank you for taking me into confidence for
some
advice. I
think
you should take the opportunity and
make
it this adventurous summer.

I
think
that you should go for a camping holiday
because
from my past camping experience, I can say that you will enjoy it.
After all
, this camping holiday will offer you the opportunity to take a long walk in the desert and observe nature in its true habitat. You can
also
go to a nearby seaside for fishing or swimming which you have always wanted to do. I believe this activity will be
good
stress
reliever in considering your high-tension workplace in our construction site. You are
be
in a fresh air and natural environment away from noisy equipment and messy workplace.

However
, I
must
warn you of a few imperfections of camping.
Firstly
, is the weather since you are going to summer it can
get
extremely
hot during the camping. The other concern is you will be sharing bathrooms with other
people
at the campsite and dealing with insects.

Finally
, I would like to
join
you on the trip it’s been a long time for me since we went on a trip together
also
this can be
good
bonding exercise.

Take care and stay safe.

Regards,

Eugene
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IELTS letter A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/She has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday, describe some possible disadvantages, say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
237 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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