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You are due to move into a rented apartment next month but you will not be able to because you have some problems. Write a letter to the course provider. In your letter, explain your situation describe your problems tell him/her when you think you can move in

You are due to move into a rented apartment next month but you will not be able to because you have some problems. Write a letter to the course provider. In your letter, explain your situation describe your problems tell him/her when you think you can move in aDdP

Dear Mr. James, I am John Smith international student from India enroll in the course of Management studies in University Of Manitoba. I am writing this to give information regards of moving to rental home next month. Actually the situation is that on the upcoming month as I have decided to move to new accommodation on rent as I promised. Also, it is written in legal agreement that I need to search my own residence as collage course provides home only for first semester. However, there are several reasons why I could not move as mentioned in contract. To begin with, I have some financial issue as currently due to pandemic situation I do not have my full time job. Furthermore, I have called my brother Jan all the way from USA. This adds fuel to fire to my situation. I would be grateful if you can allow me to stay at this place for some period of time. I will shift my self after 10-15 days after my notice period. I am ready to pay the extra amount that will charge by collage authority. I look forward to hear from you. Yours Sincerely, John Smith.

Dear Mr. James,

I am John Smith international student from India enroll in the course of Management studies in University Of Manitoba. I am writing this to give information regards of moving to rental home next
 month.

Actually the situation is that on the upcoming month as I have decided to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocate
move
 to new accommodation on rent as I promised. Also
, it is written
 in legal agreement that I need to search my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 residence as collage course provides home This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 for first
 semester. However
, there are several reasons why I could not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocate
move
 as mentioned in contract. To This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatecommence
begin
 with, I have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 financial issue as currently
 due to pandemic situation I do not have my full time job. Furthermore
, I have called my brother Jan all the way A determiner is probably missing here: "from the USA".from the USA
from USA
. This This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrues
adds
 fuel to fire to my situation.

I would be grateful if you can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
allow
 me to stay at this place for This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 period of time. I will shift my self after 10-15 days after my notice period. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 am ready to pay the extra amount that will charge by collage authority.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 look forward In the grammatical structure 'look + forward + to + verb', the verb 'to' is used with the gerund: "to hearing".to hearing
to hear
 from you.

Yours Sincerely
,

John Smith. 