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You are going to throw a party and would like to cook a special dish for your guests but do not have the recipe. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter tell your friend why you are having a party explain what dish you want to cook and ask your friend for the recipe invite your friend to the party

You are going to throw a party and would like to cook a special dish for your guests but do not have the recipe. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter tell your friend why you are having a party explain what dish you want to cook and ask your friend for the recipe invite your friend to the party ooLD
Dear Alex, I hope you are doing well. I’m planning to jazz up my birthday party this week in ‘Italian’ style. I want to break down this festival into 2 parts. The first stage of it will be set up in the backyard near the swimming pool. Moreover, I’d like to organize it with a cocktail party in the evening. I hope that we have a blast! Unfortunately, I’ve forgotten the prescription of the well-known and exquisite dish with seafood that you recently prepared for us on previous weekends. That dish was so flavourful and I want to taste it again. Could you please pass on the recipe with detailed ingredients for this main course as soon as possible? Besides, I’m going to rustle up an exclusive sauce for it. I’d like to invite you to this party, also my counterparts have already accepted my proposal (to) for this special event. I want to immerse all my guests in the lovely Italian cuisine! Best wishes, Kate
Dear Alex,

I hope you are doing well. I’m planning to jazz up my birthday party this week in ‘Italian’ style.
I
want to break down this festival into 2 parts. The
first
stage of it will
be set
up in the backyard near the swimming pool.
Moreover
, I’d like to organize it with a cocktail party in the evening. I hope that we have a blast!

Unfortunately, I’ve forgotten the prescription of the well-known and exquisite dish with seafood that you recently prepared for us on previous weekends. That dish was
so
flavourful
and I want to taste it again. Could you
please
pass on the recipe with detailed ingredients for this main course as
soon
as possible?
Besides
, I’m going to rustle up an exclusive sauce for it.

I’d like to invite you to this party,
also
my counterparts have already
accepted
my proposal (to) for this special
event
. I want to immerse all my guests in the lovely Italian cuisine!

Best wishes,

Kate
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IELTS letter You are going to throw a party and would like to cook a special dish for your guests but do not have the recipe. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter tell your friend why you are having a party explain what dish you want to cook and ask your friend for the recipe invite your friend to the party

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  American English
6 paragraphs
165 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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