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After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude. In your letter: Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writing Express your appreciation And offer him/ her to visit your home with this family.

After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude. In your letter: Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writing Express your appreciation And offer him/ her to visit your home with this family. 5xNn
Dear Sir or Madam, Hello, my name is John and I was at treatment in hospital where you are working. I want to show my appreciance about your job and what you did to help to me after an accident which happened with me three month ago. Also, all methods which you improve for my cure help me to survive as a result have a good health condition now. If I did not have your advices about supporting my injury I would have more problem, but luckelly for me you have amazing talant for treating people. If you have free time on this or next weekend, I will be happy to see you and your family in my home in weekend lunch. I hope you will find possibility to spend some time with us and will take my gratitude about yours perfect talant as a doctor and the best human treats. Pleace reply massege with answer and give some information about possibility to meet us and more details about dishes which you and your family mamber s prefer. Tours faitfully John Dou
Dear Sir or Madam,

Hello, my name is
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
John and
I was at treatment in hospital where you are working. I want to
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show
my
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appreciance
about your job and what you did to
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help
to me after an accident which happened
The verb 'happen' usually requires the preposition "to".
with
me three
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month
ago.
Also
, all methods which you
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improve
for my cure
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help
me to survive
as a result
have a
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good
health condition
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now
. If I did not have your advices about supporting my injury I would have more problem,
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but
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luckelly
for me you have amazing
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talant
for treating
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people
.

If you have free time on this or
next
weekend, I will be happy to
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see
you and your family in my home in weekend lunch. I hope you will find possibility to spend
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some
time with us and will take my gratitude about yours perfect
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talant
as a doctor and the best human treats.
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Pleace
reply
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massege
with answer and give
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some
information about possibility to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
us and more
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details
about dishes which you and your family
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mamber
s prefer.

Tours
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faitfully


John
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Dou

IELTS letter After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude. In your letter: Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writing Express your appreciation And offer him/ her to visit your home with this family.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
181 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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