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You recently bought a piece of equipment of your kitchen but it did not work. You phoned the shop but it did not work. You phoned the shop but no action was taken. Write a letter to the shop manager. In your letter · describe the problem with the equipment · explain what happened when you phoned the shop · say what you would like the manager to do

You recently bought a piece of equipment of your kitchen but it did not work. You phoned the shop but it did not work. You phoned the shop but no action was taken. Write a letter to the shop manager. In your letter · describe the problem with the equipment · explain what happened when you phoned the shop · say what you would like the manager to do 2jak

Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to let you know about the problem I faced while using the kitchen equipment which I purchased from your shop. The equipment is a Mixer grinder. The Mixer grinder blades are not sharp to grind a coconut. I also thought of trying that from the spare blade which was given to me along with the product, but it didn't work. While purchasing, I had clearly mentioned to your sales executive about the purpose of use and they offered me this product with ensuring that it would serve the purpose. Along with that the other issue I faced is the noise, the mixture grinder makes lots of noise when operated, not performing as specified in the catalog. I had called your shop to raise the query, but your customer executive didn't take interest to listen to my query. I had tried calling your shop several times for the follow up but no one responded. After trying for a week your executive connected me to technician but their approach to resolve this issue was not satisfying. I would request you to provide me a replacement for the product with a better one. Your faithfully, XYZ

Dear Sir,

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let
 you know about the problem I faced while using the kitchen equipment which I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
purchased
 from your shop. The equipment is a Mixer grinder.

The Mixer grinder blades are not sharp to grind a coconut. I also
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thought
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given
 to me along with the product, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 it didn't work. While purchasing, I had clearly
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use and
 they offered me this product with ensuring that it would serve the purpose. Along with that the other issue I faced is the noise, the mixture grinder This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createsconstructsmanufacturesproduces
makes
 lots of noise when operated, not performing as specified in the catalog.

I had called your shop to raise the query, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 your customer executive didn't take interest to listen to my query. I had tried calling your shop several times for the follow up This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 no one responded. After trying for a week your executive connected me to technician This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 their approach to resolve this issue was not satisfying.

I would request you to provide me a replacement for the product with a better one.

Did you mean "Yours"? (complimentary close)Yours
Your
faithfully
,

XYZ