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A freind has written to you asking for advice about a problem at work. You have had a similar problem in the past.write a reply to your freind. In your letter tell your friend you understand the problem. Explain what happened to you in the past. Suggest possible solutions to the problem.

A freind has written to you asking for advice about a problem at work. You have had a similar problem in the past. write a reply to your freind. In your letter tell your friend you understand the problem. Explain what happened to you in the past. Suggest possible solutions to the problem. MkVL
Hello Natasha, I was extremely happy, when I received your letter. It's been long since we have interacted. I hope you are doing great. After reading your letter I was exhilarated by getting that you got your dream job. So a lot of congratulations to you. You also mentioned in your letter that you ae facing problems of adjustment with your colleagues. I understand your trouble as I also face same situation a couple of month ago when I joined my job. Actually after receiving call letter, when I joined there everything was new for me even my collegues also. No one show any interest towards me, this all because it is an arduous task to become someone priority. Once after coming home I cried heavenly then my mother helped me to get out of this. From next day I started sharing my opinions with others. With giving ideas I started accepting their notions too. Now everyone wants to spend time with me. Most surprisingly my employer aso praised me many time in meetings I am sharing this with you that how you can overcome your troubles and able to make strong connection with your office mates. I am sure that you work on my ideas and put these so called mantras in your life also Best Wishes, Manpreet
Hello Natasha, I was
extremely
happy, when I received your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
letter
. It's been long since we have interacted. I hope you are doing great.
“After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
After
reading your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
letter
I
was exhilarated
by getting that you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
your dream job.
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So
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a lot of
congratulations to you. You
also
mentioned in your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
letter
that you
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ae
facing problems of adjustment with your colleagues. I understand your trouble as I
also
face same situation
Possible agreement error. The noun month seems to be countable; consider using: "a couple of months".
a couple of month
ago when I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
joined
my job.

Actually after receiving call
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letter
, when I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
joined
there everything was new for me even my
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collegues
also
. No one
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
show
any interest towards me, this all
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
it is an arduous task to become someone priority.
“Once” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Once
after coming home I cried heavenly then my mother
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helped
me to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
out of this. From
next
day I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
started
sharing my opinions with others. With giving
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
ideas
I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
started
accepting their notions too.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Now
everyone wants to spend time with me. Most
surprisingly
my employer
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aso
praised me
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
time in meetings

I am sharing this with you that how you can overcome your troubles and able to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
strong connection with your office mates.

I am sure that you work on my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
ideas
and put these
It seems that a hyphen is missing.
so called
mantras in your life
also


Best Wishes,
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Manpreet
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IELTS letter A freind has written to you asking for advice about a problem at work. You have had a similar problem in the past. write a reply to your freind. In your letter tell your friend you understand the problem. Explain what happened to you in the past. Suggest possible solutions to the problem.

Letter
  American English
3 paragraphs
218 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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