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You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take

You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take kBEK
Dear Anthony, I am currently a resident of your rental property at Islington for unit number 3005. I would like to inform you about the furniture that you provided me and my family with, is getting out of shape. I am facing problems with the couch and the bed. First of all, I am grateful of you for letting us use your furniture. Secondly, we tried to fix them ourselves but it seems to be worn out. The couch springs are about the take off and the legs broke. The wood is so old that putting one more nail in it would be ripping it apart. I am facing the same problem with the bed. The mattress has sunk in and the legs are about to give up. Let me know if you would like to replace or repair the furniture. Alternatively, if you would like us to buy them ourselves now.
Dear Anthony,

I am
currently
a resident of your rental property at
Possible spelling mistake found.
Islington
for unit number 3005. I would like to inform you about the furniture that you provided me and my family with, is getting out of shape.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am facing problems with the couch and the bed.
This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".
First of all
, I am grateful of you for letting us
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
your furniture.
Secondly
, we tried to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
fix
them ourselves
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
it seems to
be worn
out. The couch springs are about the take off and the legs broke. The wood is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
old
that putting one more nail in it would be ripping it apart. I am facing the same problem with the bed. The mattress has sunk in and the legs are about to give up.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Let
me know if you would like to replace or repair the furniture.
Alternatively
, if you would like us to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
them ourselves
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
.

IELTS letter You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
152 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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