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You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take KPqk
Dear Mr. Taweel, I am writing to inform you that I will no longer be able to continue with the business accounting course. I am finding it exceptionally hard to concentrate on the lessons which is resulting to set me back on my course timeline. From the past few weeks, the workload at my office has been massively increased due to new hiring which is consuming all my energy. Some days I have to work after hours to get all my paperwork complete. I was trying to keep up with the assignments but it seems of no use as I am not gaining any knowlegde from the course. Rather, I would only be cramming for the exams. I have decided to pick the course again next semester as we will completed with the hiring and training of the new staff. I hope you understand my situation at hand.
Dear Mr.
Taweel
,

I am writing to inform you that I will no longer be able to continue with the business accounting
course
. I am finding it
exceptionally
hard
to concentrate on the lessons which is resulting to set me back on my
course
timeline.

From the past few weeks, the workload at my office has been
massively
increased due to new hiring which is consuming all my energy.
Some
days I
have to
work after hours to
get
all my paperwork complete. I was trying to
keep
up with the assignments
but
it seems of no
use
as I am not gaining any
knowlegde
from the
course
.
Rather
, I would
only
be cramming for the exams.

I have decided to pick the
course
again
next
semester as we will
completed
with the hiring and training of the new staff. I hope you understand my situation at hand.
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IELTS letter You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
148 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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