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You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take KPqk
Dear Mr. Taweel, I am writing to inform you that I will no longer be able to continue with the business accounting course. I am finding it exceptionally hard to concentrate on the lessons which is resulting to set me back on my course timeline. From the past few weeks, the workload at my office has been massively increased due to new hiring which is consuming all my energy. Some days I have to work after hours to get all my paperwork complete. I was trying to keep up with the assignments but it seems of no use as I am not gaining any knowlegde from the course. Rather, I would only be cramming for the exams. I have decided to pick the course again next semester as we will completed with the hiring and training of the new staff. I hope you understand my situation at hand.
Dear Mr.
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Taweel
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I am writing to inform you that I will no longer be able to continue with the business accounting
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
. I am finding it
exceptionally
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
hard
to concentrate on the lessons which is resulting to set me back on my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
timeline.

From the past few weeks, the workload at my office has been
massively
increased due to new hiring which is consuming all my energy.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Some
days I
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
work after hours to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
all my paperwork complete. I was trying to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
up with the assignments
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
it seems of no
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
as I am not gaining any
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knowlegde
from the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
.
Rather
, I would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
be cramming for the exams.

I have decided to pick the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
again
next
semester as we will
The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: "complete"
completed
with the hiring and training of the new staff. I hope you understand my situation at hand.

IELTS letter You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

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  American English
4 paragraphs
148 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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