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You have seen an advertisement for a couple, who live in Australia, for someone to teach their two children your language for a year.Write a letter to the couple. In your letterexplain why you thunk you would be suitable,

You have seen an advertisement for a couple, who live in Australia, for someone to teach their two children your language for a year. Write a letter to the couple. In your letterexplain why you thunk you would be suitable, PpGX
Dear Mr. /Mrs. Zlupage, I am adressing you in this letter concerning an advertisement I saw in our weekly newspaper. You are searching for a tutor that will be able to teach correct Spanish. Let me expose my portfolio briefly hoping to be your best candidate. Spanish is the language I grew up taking, furthermore I studied Spanish Literaturre in college from which I graduated with an expert certificate. To add on that I am the editor of the Spanish rubric that is published in our newspaper. I will be happily able to help your kids aquire the exact skills that will make them at ease with Spanish. And, if for some reason, they would like to continue their studies in Spain, I would write them a recommendation letter. As for your family, I could be your guide once you travel to Spain as well. That job would add much value to my resume, my professors would be so proud of me. Teaching was always a passion so granting this opportunity would help me a lot. Awaiting your prompt response. Emilio Hajj
Dear Mr. /Mrs.
Zlupage
, I am
adressing
you in this letter concerning an advertisement I
saw
in our weekly newspaper. You are searching for a tutor that will be able to teach correct Spanish.
Let
me expose my portfolio
briefly
hoping to be your best candidate. Spanish is the language I grew up taking,
furthermore
I studied Spanish
Literaturre
in college from which I graduated with an expert certificate. To
add
on that I am the editor of the Spanish rubric that
is published
in our newspaper. I will be
happily
able to
help
your kids
aquire
the exact
skills
that will
make
them at
ease
with Spanish. And, if for
some
reason, they would like to continue their studies in Spain, I would write them a recommendation letter. As for your family, I could be your guide once you travel to Spain
as well
. That job would
add
much value to my resume, my professors would be
so
proud of me. Teaching was always a passion
so
granting this opportunity would
help
me a lot. Awaiting your prompt response. Emilio
Hajj
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IELTS letter You have seen an advertisement for a couple, who live in Australia, for someone to teach their two children your language for a year. Write a letter to the couple. In your letterexplain why you thunk you would be suitable,

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
181 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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