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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write at least 150 words. You are currently taking a course at a college but you will need to have a week off during this course. Write a letter to the college Principal. In the letter give details of your course explain why you need a week off say what you want the Principal to do.

You are currently taking a course at a college but you will need to have a week off during this course. Write a letter to the college Principal. In the letter give details of your course explain why you need a week off say what you want the Principal to do. b8o6
Dear Mr Charles. I am writing this letter to inform you that I would like to take a week off as I am travelling to my home town. My name is Nilam Chauhan and currently pursuing Masters in Business management. I enrolled my self in two years masters course in business management. My course contains six semester with project submission in last year. I am regularly attending my lectures. However, yesterday I have received call from my father stating that my mother is not well and admitted in hospital. She is suffering with fever and not recovering at all. Doctor suggested to keep her in hospital for few more days. My father is working so I need to be there to look after my mother. I would request you to grant permission for a week off. If possible please inform my tutors to provide me lecture notes on my email so I can study when I get time. I will keep you updated once I reach there. Looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, Nilam Chauhan
Dear Mr Charles.

I am writing this letter to inform you that I would like to take a week off as I am travelling to my home town. My name is
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Nilam
Chauhan and
currently
pursuing Masters in Business management.

I enrolled my self in two years masters course in business management. My course contains six
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semester
with project submission in last year. I am
regularly
attending my lectures.
However
, yesterday I have received call from my father stating that my mother is not well and admitted in hospital. She is suffering with fever and not recovering at all. Doctor suggested to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
her in hospital for few more days. My father is working
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so
I need to be there to look after my mother. I would request you to grant permission for a week off. If possible
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
inform my tutors to provide me lecture notes on my email
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
I can study when I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
time. I will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
you updated once I reach there.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours
sincerely
,

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Nilam
Chauhan

IELTS letter You are currently taking a course at a college but you will need to have a week off during this course. Write a letter to the college Principal. In the letter give details of your course explain why you need a week off say what you want the Principal to do.

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175 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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