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You want to sell your television. you think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you. Write a letter to your friend. explain 1 why you are selling the television.2 describe the television.3 suggest a date when your friend can come and see it.

You want to sell your television. you think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you. Write a letter to your friend. explain 1 why you are selling the television. 2 describe the television. 3 suggest a date when your friend can come and see it. KwVM3
Dear maanas, Hope you and my television are doing well. I am feeling happy. Let you know that I got a job in aboard(Canada). So I will settle in two months. That's why I want to sell my television which I brought six months ago. If you are interested to purchase that tv, therefore, I described my tv features. First of all it is a LG brand. Screen size is 55inch. Screen resolution - ultra HD. Real 4k display. Active HDR, blue tooth, ultra sound, realistic gaming experience with LG UHD tv, wide viewing angle, 3D technology. All features are working good and my television is in good condition. So, I think you might like to buy a tv from me. Primarily you will come at next week on Sunday in any time. I am at home whole day and check the tv and confirm that is same as per description which I gave you in this letter. If you like the television I sold you as soon as early. I hope you definitly like this tv. And do not take a tension about price you are my best friend. My first preference is sell a television, whether I sold in low price. So, we will meet soon at my place. Let me know if you can not make it. Best regards Pooja
Dear
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maanas
, Hope you and my
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television
are doing well. I am feeling happy.
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Let
you know that I
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got
a job in aboard(Canada).
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So
I will settle in two months. That's why I want to sell my
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television
which I brought six months ago. If you
are interested
to
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purchase
that
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tv
,
therefore
, I
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described
my
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tv
features.
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First of all
it is
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LG brand. Screen size is
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55inch
. Screen resolution
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ultra HD. Real 4k display. Active HDR, blue tooth,
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ultra sound
, realistic gaming experience with LG
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UHD
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tv
, wide viewing angle, 3D technology. All features are working
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good
and my
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television
is in
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good
condition.
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So
, I
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think
you might like to
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buy
a
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tv
from me.
Primarily
you will
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come
at
next
week on Sunday in any time. I am at home whole day and
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check
the
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tv
and confirm
that is
same as per description which I gave you in this letter.
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If
you like the
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television
I sold you as
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soon
as early. I hope you
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definitly
like this
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tv
. And do not take a tension about price you are my best friend. My
first
preference is sell a
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television
, whether I sold in low price.
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So
, we will
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meet
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soon
at my place.
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Let
me know if you can not
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make
it. Best regards
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
Pooja
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IELTS letter You want to sell your television. you think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you. Write a letter to your friend. explain 1 why you are selling the television. 2 describe the television. 3 suggest a date when your friend can come and see it.

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