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You are not hsppy about a service you received a couple of days ago from a company and you have decided to complain about it

You are not hsppy about a service you received a couple of days ago from a company and you have decided to complain about it kYx2W
Dear, sir/ madamI am writing this letter to do complain about your staff behaviour towards the customure. I visitied your company i had immensly worst experience in your comlanu by yoir emplyoee so, i hope ypu would take proper action towards this. I visited your company on 15 th april. I visited your co. pany because i wanted to buy new AC but when i visited your company all employers were busy to watch cricket on television. I request your employee to guide me about AC and its function. Non of them ready to guid me. Even they show me very rud behaviour. So this gesture was extremly awakward. I hope you will take proper action towards these And pleas give your employee training about how to deal with customer otherwise you lost your good customer
Dear, sir/
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madamI
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am
writing this letter to do complain about your staff
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behaviour
towards the
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customure
. I
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visitied
your
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company
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i
had
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immensly
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worst
experience in your
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comlanu
by
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yoir
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emplyoee
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so
,
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i
hope
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ypu
would take proper action towards this. I visited your
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company
on
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15 th
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april
.
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I
visited your co.
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pany
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because
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i
wanted to
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buy
new AC
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but
when
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i
visited your
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company
all employers were busy to
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watch
cricket on television.
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I
request your employee to guide me about AC and its function. Non of them ready to
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guid
me. Even they
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show
me
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very
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rud
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behaviour
.
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So
this gesture was
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extremly
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awakward
. I hope you will take proper action towards these And pleas give your employee training about how to deal with customer
otherwise
you lost your
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good
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customer

IELTS letter You are not hsppy about a service you received a couple of days ago from a company and you have decided to complain about it

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
135 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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