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You are not hsppy about a service you received a couple of days ago from a company and you have decided to complain about it

You are not hsppy about a service you received a couple of days ago from a company and you have decided to complain about it kYx2W
Dear, sir/ madamI am writing this letter to do complain about your staff behaviour towards the customure. I visitied your company i had immensly worst experience in your comlanu by yoir emplyoee so, i hope ypu would take proper action towards this. I visited your company on 15 th april. I visited your co. pany because i wanted to buy new AC but when i visited your company all employers were busy to watch cricket on television. I request your employee to guide me about AC and its function. Non of them ready to guid me. Even they show me very rud behaviour. So this gesture was extremly awakward. I hope you will take proper action towards these And pleas give your employee training about how to deal with customer otherwise you lost your good customer
Dear, sir/
madamI
am
writing this letter to do complain about your staff
behaviour
towards the
customure
. I
visitied
your
company
i
had
immensly
worst
experience in your
comlanu
by
yoir
emplyoee
so
,
i
hope
ypu
would take proper action towards this. I visited your
company
on
15 th
april
.
I
visited your co.
pany
because
i
wanted to
buy
new AC
but
when
i
visited your
company
all employers were busy to
watch
cricket on television.
I
request your employee to guide me about AC and its function. Non of them ready to
guid
me. Even they
show
me
very
rud
behaviour
.
So
this gesture was
extremly
awakward
. I hope you will take proper action towards these And pleas give your employee training about how to deal with customer
otherwise
you lost your
good
customer
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IELTS letter You are not hsppy about a service you received a couple of days ago from a company and you have decided to complain about it

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
135 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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