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communication with other people face to face is better than communicating with telephone, letters or email. Do you agree with the statement.

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There is no denying that communication is an essential and important skill of life among all the skills. It is the process of exchanging ideas either by sending or receiving information to people in verbal, non-verbal and oral ways. Although face-to-face is the traditional way of conversation but communicate through telephone or email is the best gift from technology to us. Let us discuss the benefits of both ways of communication as follows. To begin, face-to-face conversation is the best way to understand and capture information. Another benefit of face-to-face communication is that one can understand the ideas by observing the facial expression, body gesture, attitude, words, eye contact etc. Besides that, people get a chance to know the behaviour of the person in front of them. For example, the tone used by them during communication and also the reaction of the receiver while getting information. Moreover, face-to-face communication helps to resolve the conflict or misunderstanding in a better and easier way and strengthen the relationships between people through meetings. Furthermore, a person can get immediate feedback from the people with whom he/she communicate. On the other side, communicate with others via telephone, letters or email also known as online transmission, has many benefits. First of all, this type of delivery is a convenient way as it helps to connect people globally to express their feelings to each other. Secondly, people feel more comfortable sharing their feeling by this method because of time. In addition to it, an online conversation is used as a supplement, as people get a chance to make friends from other countries on some social network sites such as Skype, Facebook, Linked In etc. To wrap up, according to me, both face-to-face or online communication is better and important in their own ways. It depends upon the situation where we can use them accordingly.
There is no denying that
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communication
is an essential and
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important
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skill
of life among all the
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skills
. It is the process of exchanging
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ideas
either by sending or receiving information to
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people
in verbal, non-verbal and oral
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ways
. Although face-to-face is the traditional
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way
of conversation
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but
communicate through telephone or email is the best gift from technology to us.
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us discuss the benefits of both
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ways
of
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communication
as follows.

To
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begin
, face-to-face conversation is the best
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way
to understand and capture information. Another benefit of face-to-face
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communication
is that one can understand the
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ideas
by observing the facial expression, body gesture, attitude, words, eye contact etc.
Besides
that,
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people
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get
a
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chance
to know the
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behaviour
of the person in front of them.
For example
, the tone
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used
by them during
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communication
and
also
the reaction of the receiver while getting information.
Moreover
, face-to-face
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communication
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helps
to resolve the conflict or misunderstanding in a better and easier
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way
and strengthen the relationships between
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people
through meetings.
Furthermore
, a person can
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get
immediate feedback from the
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people
with whom he/she communicate.

On the
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other
side, communicate with others via telephone, letters or email
also
known as online transmission, has
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many
benefits.
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First of all
, this type of delivery is a convenient
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way
as it
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helps
to connect
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people
globally to express their feelings to each
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other
.
Secondly
,
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people
feel more comfortable sharing their feeling by this method
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because
of time.
In addition
to it, an online conversation is
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used
as a supplement, as
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people
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get
a chance to
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make
friends from
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other
countries on
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some
social network sites such as Skype, Facebook, Linked In etc.

To wrap up, according to me, both face-to-face or online
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communication
is better and
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important
in their
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own
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ways
. It depends upon the situation where we can
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use
them
accordingly
.
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IELTS letter communication with other people face to face is better than communicating with telephone, letters or email.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
308 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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