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You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference from someone who knew you when you were at school. Write a letter to one of your old teachers asking for a reference. In your letter: say what job you have applied for explain why you want this job suggest what information the teacher should include

Dear Mr George, Hope you and your family are doing well. I am Mark Thomas, one of your past students, writing for your reference for a job I am going to apply to. I am hoping that you would write me a recommendation letter that my prospective employer is expecting. I am delighted to inform you that I am applying for a position in Morgan's Incorporation. This is a dream job for me and working for a reputable company like Morgan's Incorporation will enable me to gain valuable experiences and give wings to my career. One of the requirements for applying to this job is a reference letter from a known person from my school whose words count. Being an international student, I don't know many people here who are worthy of such a recommendation. I will highly appreciate if you provide me with a reference letter which requires some basic information about me and my studies and how can I be a suitable candidate for the junior executive position in an international company. The company needs this letter before the end of July. I would like to request you to provide me with the letter as early as possible. I will be indebted to you for the favour. Yours sincerely, Mark Thomas
Dear Mr George,

Hope you and your family are doing well. I am Mark Thomas, one of your past students, writing for your reference for a job I am going to apply to. I am hoping that you would write me a recommendation
letter
that my prospective employer is expecting.

I
am delighted
to inform you that I am applying for a position in Morgan's Incorporation. This is a dream job for me and working for a reputable
company
like Morgan's Incorporation will enable me to gain valuable experiences and give wings to my career.

One of the requirements for applying to this job is a reference
letter
from a known person from my school whose words count. Being an international student, I don't know
many
people
here who are worthy of such a recommendation. I will
highly
appreciate if you provide me with a reference
letter
which requires
some
basic information about me and my studies and how can I be a suitable candidate for the junior executive position in an international
company
. The
company
needs this
letter
before
the
end
of July.

I would like to request you to provide me with the
letter
as early as possible. I will
be indebted
to you for the favour.

Yours
sincerely
,

Mark Thomas
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IELTS letter You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference from someone who knew you when you were at school. Write a letter to one of your old teachers asking for a reference. In your letter: say what job you have applied for explain why you want this job suggest what information the teacher should include

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
212 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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