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You recently assigned cl. contract for your home painting. The job is one, but not sattgied with the quality of work. Write a letter to the contractor for the same. In your letter, • describe what you are not satisfied with • say what you want the contractor to do and you’re say what action plan Say what was good about the service

You recently assigned cl. contract for your home painting. The job is one, but not sattgied with the quality of work. Write a letter to the contractor for the same. In your letter, • describe what you are not satisfied with • say what you want the contractor to do and you’re say what action plan Say what was good about the service GN6EQ
Dear Sir/Madam, I am Shelly Watson and I write this letter to you to express my dissatisfaction with the painting work done by your team recently at my home. We have assigned the agreement for painting my whole house including front gate to backyard. The work is completed earlier than mentioned period. I was so overwhelmed by this. However, when I checked my house after the painting completion, I found out that walls of my master bedroom’s balcony are not fully painted. It seems like they have just done coating only, as, the previous colour’s layer is clearly visible. Additionally, workers have not removed the stains of colour droplets from the floor. These stains are stealing the beauty of my newly polished flooring. Therefore, I would like to request you please ask your staff to correct these messy mistakes. I want it to be completed within this week. I would not release remained bill amount without finishing of mentioned work. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours Faithfully, Shelly Watson.
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am Shelly Watson and I write this letter to you to express my dissatisfaction with the painting work done by your team recently at my home.

We have assigned the agreement for painting my whole
house
including front gate to backyard. The work
is completed
earlier than mentioned period. I was
so
overwhelmed by this.
However
, when I
checked
my
house
after the painting completion, I found out that walls of my master bedroom’s balcony are not
fully
painted. It seems like they have
just
done coating
only
, as, the previous
colour
’s layer is
clearly
visible.
Additionally
, workers have not removed the stains of
colour
droplets from the floor. These stains are stealing the beauty of my
newly
polished flooring.

Therefore
, I would like to request you
please
ask your staff to correct these messy mistakes. I want it to
be completed
within this week. I would not release remained bill amount without finishing of mentioned work.

Looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours
Faithfully
,

Shelly Watson.
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IELTS letter You recently assigned cl. contract for your home painting. The job is one, but not sattgied with the quality of work. Write a letter to the contractor for the same. In your letter, • describe what you are not satisfied with • say what you want the contractor to do and you’re say what action plan Say what was good about the service

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170 words
6.0
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