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lbu have reuntllt started work in a nerN' compsny. l'l'rite u letter to an English-spr*king friend. In your letter * explain lvfty you changedjohs . desu"ibe Jtowr new joh , tel! fuimlher j,o11v other mews

lbu have reuntllt started work in a nerN' compsny. l'l'rite u letter to an English-spr*king friend. In your letter * explain lvfty you changedjohs. desu"ibe Jtowr new joh, tel! fuimlher j, o11v other mews LBnop
Dear Helen, I hope you are in pink of pink of your health with grace of almighty. i did not have write to you from last one month as I was busy in my work of house shifting. we shilfted to a new apartment in last month. The apartment is good but my office was too far from it so I decided to quit this job and I am really happy to tell you that I have got another job. My new office is only four kms away from my new apartment moreover the work environment is also good and working time is also flexible. The colleagues are also very supportive I have got good salary package. I am really enjoying my new job. One more good news I want to tell you that my elder sister marriage got fixed and it is going to take place in October month. I will send you invitation I am really excited about her marriage and would be extremely happy if you could attend it. I hope to hear from you soon. Your's lovinglyMaria
Dear Helen, I hope you are in
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pink of pink of
your health with grace of almighty.
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i
did not have
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write
to you from last one month as I was busy in my work of
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house
shifting.
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we
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shilfted
to a
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new
apartment in last month. The apartment is
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good
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but
my office was too far from it
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so
I decided to quit this
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job and
I am
really
happy to
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tell
you that I have
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got
another job. My
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new
office is
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only
four
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kms
away from my
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new
apartment
moreover
the work environment is
also
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good
and working time is
also
flexible. The colleagues are
also
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very
supportive I have
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got
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good
salary package. I am
really
enjoying my
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new
job.

One more
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good
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news
I want to
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tell
you that my elder sister marriage
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got
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fixed
and it is going to take place in October month. I will
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send
you invitation I am
really
excited about her marriage and would be
extremely
happy if you could attend it. I hope to hear from you
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soon
.
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Your's
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lovinglyMaria

IELTS letter lbu have reuntllt started work in a nerN' compsny. l'l'rite u letter to an English-spr*king friend. In your letter * explain lvfty you changedjohs. desu"ibe Jtowr new joh, tel! fuimlher j, o11v other mews

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