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You are the president of FELTE Youth Council. You have decided to carry out a meaningful project for which you want to receive some funding from the faculty

You are the president of FELTE Youth Council. You have decided to carry out a meaningful project for which you want to receive some funding from the faculty 8aPQm
Dear Ms. Nguyen, I am writing on behalf of the president of the FELTE Youth Council to request your permission to fund our new project called “The Melody of Souls” which my team and AC4U club are cooperating to carry out this autumn. “The Melody of Souls” is a project that aims to connect faculty students. Each student attending university requires them to adjust to a new environment with new people right away, which can be stressful and exhausting. This project will assist students in getting to know one another through a different method called music. Music can heal those scratched souls, so we chose music to spread out the positive energy. Every month, we will convene a meeting with representatives from all classes to collaborate on a faculty song. Any challenge in life, or joy from friends, might be reflected in the lyrics. Our project lets students relieve stress in daily life and allows them to show off their talents that they rarely do. We hope to be supported by the teachers, and we want to apply for funding from the faculty. The amount required is about 20 million. We will rent the audio system and musical instruments for the students with that fund, and if the faculty can provide us, we will be very grateful. This fund can help us keep the project going while also improves the image of the faculty. It also demonstrates that the faculty is concerned about the mental health of students. I hope that you will forgive me for troubling you with this matter. I would be grateful if you can keep me informed about your last decision. Thank you in anticipation of your cooperation. Yours sincerely, Trang Le Quynh Trang
Dear Ms. Nguyen,

I am writing on behalf of the president of the
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FELTE
Youth Council to request your permission to fund our new
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project
called “The Melody of Souls” which my team and AC4U club are cooperating to carry out this autumn.

“The Melody of Souls” is a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
project
that aims to connect faculty
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students
. Each
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student
attending university requires them to adjust to a new environment with new
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people
right away, which can be stressful and exhausting. This
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project
will assist
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
in getting to know one another through a
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different
method called music. Music can heal those scratched souls,
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so
we chose music to spread out the
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
energy. Every month, we will convene a meeting with representatives from all classes to collaborate on a faculty song. Any challenge in life, or joy from friends, might
be reflected
in the lyrics.

Our
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project
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lets
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students
relieve
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stress
in daily life and
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allows
them to
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show
off their talents that they rarely do. We hope to
be supported
by the teachers, and we want to apply for funding from the faculty. The amount required is about 20 million. We will rent the audio system and musical instruments for the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
with that fund, and if the faculty can provide us, we will be
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very
grateful. This fund can
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help
us
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keep
the
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project
going while
also
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improves
the image of the faculty. It
also
demonstrates that the faculty
is concerned
about the mental health of students.

I hope that you will forgive me for troubling you with this matter. I would be grateful if you can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
me informed about your last decision. Thank you in anticipation of your cooperation.

Yours
sincerely
,

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Trang


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Quynh
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IELTS letter You are the president of FELTE Youth Council. You have decided to carry out a meaningful project for which you want to receive some funding from the faculty

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