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You saw an advertisement telling about the vacancy in a school team. You would like to apply as a team member. Write a letter. In your letter -apply for the vacancy -describe yourself (mental and physical)

You saw an advertisement telling about the vacancy in a school team. You would like to apply as a team member. Write a letter. In your letter -apply for the vacancy -describe yourself (mental and physical) k61XN
Dear Sir or MadamI am very interested in your advertisement in today's edition of local newspaper 'Yoshlar ovozi' and I want to apply to be a member of your school number 48. I am twenty five years old and obtained a degree in Teaching English as a Foreign language at Andizhan State University in 2018. I feel I have many of the important qualifications needed for this job. I am proactive and able to handle multiple tasks simultaneously. I am currently looking for a position that will allow me to develop my skills and experience. In addition to this, I participate in Computer course. I enjoy several outdoor activities such as planting flowers. I am sociable and I can get on well with new people easily. I would be grateful if you could consider me for this position. Yours faithfully, Makhliyo Abdukakhkharova.
Dear Sir or
MadamI
am
very
interested in your advertisement in
today
's edition of local newspaper '
Yoshlar
ovozi
' and I want to apply to be a member of your school number 48. I am
twenty five
years
old
and obtained a degree in Teaching English as a Foreign language at
Andizhan
State University in 2018. I feel I have
many
of the
important
qualifications needed for this job.
I
am proactive and able to handle multiple tasks
simultaneously
.
I
am
currently
looking for a position that will
allow
me to develop my
skills
and experience.
In addition
to this, I participate in Computer course. I enjoy several outdoor activities such as planting flowers. I am sociable and I can
get
on well with new
people
easily
.
I
would be grateful if you could consider me for this position. Yours
faithfully
,
Makhliyo
Abdukakhkharova
.
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IELTS letter You saw an advertisement telling about the vacancy in a school team. You would like to apply as a team member. Write a letter. In your letter -apply for the vacancy -describe yourself (mental and physical)

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
142 words
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text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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