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A complain letter.One of my neighbours' son broken my cars window

A complain letter. One of my neighbours' son broken my cars window joWqp

Dear Madam, I am writing to express my consern about your elder boy's bad action about my car which happened two days ago in the evening. The firs promlem was that your son tried to break the windshield of my car. Because he was interested in a toy air blower which dispersed the fragrant scent inside the car and wanted to get it. When I heard the signalization of my car, I quickly arrived at the car park. But, until I came, your son had already run away. And than, While asking the children who were playing there, I knew that your boy had done it and went away with fear. I know, your son is still a child and he did not want to steal intentionally and he does not know it yet. However, the most visible problem was that a toy which was your son broke with stone, full of liquid and it flew down in the radio. As if the broken windscreen was not enough, now the radio is not working today. I would therefore be grateful if you could give me a full refund for broken windscreen and no working radio. Unless I hear from you within a week, I shall have to take legal advice on the matter. I hope we can sort this matter out amicably. Yours faithfully Mohinur

Dear Madam,

I am writing to express my Possible spelling mistake found.concern
consern
 about your elder boy's This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
 action about my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
 which happened two days ago in the evening. The firs Possible spelling mistake found.problem
promlem
 was that your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withboyheiroffspringdescendant
son
 tried to break the windshield of my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
Because
 he was interested
 in a toy air blower which dispersed the fragrant scent inside the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
 and wanted to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 it. When I heard the signalization of my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
, I quickly
 arrived at the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
 park. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
, until I came, your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withboyheiroffspringdescendant
son
 had already run away. And Did you mean "then"?then
than
, While asking the children who were playing there, I knew that your boy had done it and went away with fear. I know, your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withboyheiroffspringdescendant
son
 is still
 a Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).child, and
child and
 he did not want to steal Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).intentionally, and
intentionally and
 he does not know it yet
. However
, the most visible problem was that a toy which was your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withboyheiroffspringdescendant
son
 broke with stone, full of liquid and it flew down in the radio. As if the broken windscreen was not This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 the radio is not working This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
today
. I would therefore
 be grateful if you could give me a full refund for broken windscreen and no working radio. Unless I hear from you within a week, I shall This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 take legal advice on the matter. I hope we can sort this matter out amicably
. Yours faithfully
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