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You recendly had bought computer but it is not working

You recendly had bought computer but it is not working 8jEw

Dear Sir or Madam. I am writing to complete about my computer which I recently bought from your supermarket. After only two days thing started to go wrong. On the 4 th of December I visited one of local store in order to buy computer which was desktop. Looking around the shop I encountered expected item which was controlled by shop assistant. After getting all information I decided to purchase it. When I came back home I saw broken keyboard and mouse. Then I was going to write but I did not use. Furthermore, I was not able to connect on the internet for searching and download several information. Before I paid for it we had tested the television and adds which seemed to function well, however after three days of using, it didn't function properly the main problem is that is broken keyboard and mouse. I would like you to replace the desktop with well functioning one. U expect to receive the same type of unit and brand. Otherwise, I will be forced to report this to Customer Service Association responsible for this problem. I look forward to receiving to reply Yours faithfully. Iroda

Dear Sir or Madam.

I am writing to complete about my computer which I recently This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
 from your supermarket. “After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
After
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 two days thing This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 to go This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:incorrect
wrong
.

On the Did you mean "4th"?4th
4 th
 of December I visited one of local store in order to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 computer which was desktop. Looking around the shop I encountered This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipated
expected
 item which was controlled
 by shop assistant. “After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
After
 getting all information I decided to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
purchase
 it. When I came back home I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 broken keyboard and mouse. Then I was going to write This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 I did not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
. Furthermore
, I was not able to connect on the internet for searching and download Possible agreement error. The noun information seems to be uncountable; consider using: "some information".some information
several information
.

This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
Before
 I paid for Consider adding a comma here.it,
it
 we had This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evaluated
tested
 the television and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrues
adds
 which seemed to function well, however
 after three days of using, it didn't function properly
 the main problem is that is broken
 keyboard and mouse.

I would like you to replace the desktop with well functioning one. U This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipate
expect
 to receive the same type of unit and brand. Otherwise
, I will be forced
 to report this to Customer Service Association responsible for this problem. I look forward to receiving to Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphreply.reply!reply?reply:reply,reply;
reply


Yours faithfully
.

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