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You recently bought a blender and now it is not properly.

You recently bought a blender and now it is not properly. xqWo
Dear Sir or Madam. I am writing to complain about blender which I recently bought from your shop. After only two days, things started to go wrong. On the 21 st of October I visited one of your local shops in order to buy a blender for myself. Because I needed such kind of thing for my family. Looking around the shop I encountered expected item and I asked a shop assistant about it. After getting all information I decided to purchase it. Then I take it to my home and I wanted to use it immediately. When I used the blender for the first time it worket properly and quickly. Two days later. Hovewer, when I utilized it the second time there seemed to have been a fault while it was working. It did not working as I wanted. It worked slowly when I was preparing cocktail. Furthemore when I tried to prepare another the same thing happened. In addition, a button of the blender did not worked properly. I would like you to replace the blender with functioning one. I expect to reseve the some type of unit and brand. Otherwise, unfortunately, I will be forced to report thie to Customer Servise Association responsible for this problem. I look forward to receiving a reply. Your sincerely Julia Morgan.
Dear Sir or Madam. I am writing to complain about
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blender
which I recently
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bought
from your
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shop
. After
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only
two days, things
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started
to go
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wrong
. On the
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21 st
of October I visited one of your local
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shops
in order to
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buy
a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
blender
for myself.
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Because
I needed such kind of thing for my family. Looking around the
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shop
I encountered
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expected
item and I asked a
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shop
assistant about it.
“After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
After
getting all information I decided to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchase
it. Then I take it to my home and I wanted to
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use
it immediately. When I
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used
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
blender
for the
first
time it
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worket
properly
and
quickly
. Two days later.
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Hovewer
, when I utilized it the second time there seemed to have been a fault while it was working. It did not
After the auxiliary verb 'do', use the base form of a verb. Did you mean "work"?
working
as I wanted. It worked
slowly
when I was preparing cocktail.
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Furthemore
when I tried to prepare another the same thing happened.
In addition
, a button of the
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blender
did not
The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: "work"
worked
properly
. I would like you to replace the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
blender
with functioning one. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
expect
to
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reseve
the
Did you mean "same"?
some
type of unit and brand.
Otherwise
, unfortunately, I will
be forced
to report
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thie
to Customer
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Servise
Association responsible for this problem. I look forward to receiving a reply. Your
sincerely
Julia Morgan.

IELTS letter You recently bought a blender and now it is not properly.

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  American English
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