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A friend has offered you some work in his company. You are currently employed and not able to start for 3 months. Write a reply to your friend. In your letter: – give details of what you know about his company. – explain your current situation – give your answer to the offer and explain why

A friend has offered you some work in his company. You are currently employed and not able to start for 3 months. Write a reply to your friend. In your letter: – give details of what you know about his company. – explain your current situation – give your answer to the offer and explain why 287x
Dear Mark, Hope you're doing good. I received your letter and I'd like to thankyou for the offer to collaborate with your company. To my knowledge XYZ Pvt Ltd is "Knowledge Process Outsourcer" which assists UBS by analysing several Industries and Companies. It would be great if you can provide further details about the company. It has been 8 years since I'm working for the same employer and I'm ready to explore new opportunities. Moreover, I've resigned as a Lead Associate, in search of a fresh challenges, and I'm glad that you reached me at the right moment. I really appreciate your offer but I couldn't accept it for at least three months from hereon, because I need to serve my notice period in my office. There is no buy-out option here, hence I cannot join your entity this soon. Let me know if your employer can wait for three months, so that I can associate with you. Best wishes, Nithin
Dear Mark,

Hope you're doing
good
. I received your letter and I'd like to
thankyou
for the offer to collaborate with your
company
.

To my knowledge XYZ Pvt Ltd is
"
Knowledge Process
Outsourcer
"
which assists UBS by
analysing
several Industries and
Companies
. It would be great if you can provide
further
details
about the
company
.

It has been 8 years since I'm working for the same employer and I'm ready to explore new opportunities.
Moreover
, I've resigned as a Lead Associate, in search of a fresh challenges, and I'm glad that you reached me at the right moment.

I
really
appreciate your offer
but
I couldn't accept it for at least three months from hereon,
because
I need to serve my notice period in my office. There is no
buy
-out option here,
hence
I cannot
join
your entity this
soon
.

Let
me know if your employer can wait for three months,
so
that I can associate with you.

Best wishes,

Nithin
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IELTS letter A friend has offered you some work in his company. You are currently employed and not able to start for 3 months. Write a reply to your friend. In your letter: – give details of what you know about his company. – explain your current situation – give your answer to the offer and explain why

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
160 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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