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You missed an international flight due to a problem at the airport. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter: Describe what happened that caused you to miss your flight Explain how missing your flight impacted you Clearly state what you would like the airline to do

You missed an international flight due to a problem at the airport. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter: Describe what happened that caused you to miss your flight Explain how missing your flight impacted you Clearly state what you would like the airline to do 8jXV
Dear Mr. ABC, Manager, A1 Airlines. My name is Rashmi and I am writing this letter to bring an unexpected incident which occurred today morning when I landed at New Delhi International airport from Mumbai domestic airport. I had booked a connecting flight to Dubai with your airlines, for which I was supposed to re-submit my luggage. However, while waiting for my belongings at the conveyor belt, I found that somehow my stuff was left at Mumbai airport. I had checked it in there, and have a valid slip for the same. I have attached the luggage slip here for your referral. Moreover, I later realized that there were few more passengers like me. Unfortunately, the entire process was so delayed that I could not catch my flight for Dubai. Consequently, I am already delayed for the conference I had to attend. As the mishap is due to inadequate coordination of your ground staff, I expect you to arrange a ticket for me in the immediate airlines flying to my destination at no extra expense. Thanks, Dr. Shah
Dear Mr. ABC,

Manager,

A1 Airlines.

My name is
Rashmi and
I am writing this letter to bring an unexpected incident which occurred
today morning
when I landed at New Delhi International airport from Mumbai domestic airport. I had booked a connecting flight to Dubai with your airlines, for which I
was supposed
to re-submit my luggage.
However
, while waiting for my belongings at the conveyor belt, I found that somehow my stuff was
left
at Mumbai airport. I had
checked
it in there, and have a valid slip for the same. I have attached the luggage slip here for your referral.
Moreover
, I later realized that there were few more passengers like me.

Unfortunately, the entire process was
so
delayed that I could not catch my flight for Dubai.
Consequently
, I am already delayed for the conference I had to attend.

As the mishap is due to inadequate coordination of your ground staff, I
expect
you to arrange a ticket for me in the immediate airlines flying to my destination at no extra expense.

Thanks,

Dr. Shah
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IELTS letter You missed an international flight due to a problem at the airport. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter: Describe what happened that caused you to miss your flight Explain how missing your flight impacted you Clearly state what you would like the airline to do

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  American English
8 paragraphs
177 words
6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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