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Write a letter to your English speaking friend who is visiting you soon and asking you what presents your family would like. Write - Who your family consists of - What kind of presents each member would like. - How you feel about your friend coming to visit

Write a letter to your English speaking friend who is visiting you soon and asking you what presents your family would like. Write - Who your family consists of - What kind of presents each member would like. - How you feel about your friend coming to visit PdeE
Dear Jensi, I am writing this letter to you regarding reply to your letter asking for my family and the likings. We all are very happy that you are joining us this Diwali. All the Preparation for the Diwali celebration has been done. My Wife and Parents are eagerly waiting to meet you because I have told them about us when we were at Canada and how you supported me during those time. My Son is very excited to play with you younger son as they both familiar to each other. Very generous of you to ask what my family like as a present. But I suggest you to not carrying any sort of present for them as all the thing are available here in India. The best gift for us would be that is you and you sons Presence and celebrate this Diwali along with us. I and whole family are counting reverse countdown for the day you are landing India and enjoy this Diwali with you. A big Thanks to you for all the happiness and support you gave me during my tough times in Canada. Regards Thanking you……. Yours Lovingly Vaibhav Mehta
Dear
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Jensi
,

I am writing this letter to you regarding reply to your letter asking for my family and the
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likings
. We all are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
happy that you are joining us this Diwali. All the Preparation for the Diwali celebration has
been done
.

My Wife and Parents are
eagerly
waiting to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
I have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
told
them about us when we were at Canada and how you supported me during those time. My Son is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
excited to play with you younger son as they both familiar to each other.

This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Very
generous of you to ask what my family like as a present.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
I suggest you to not carrying any sort of present for them as all the thing are available here in India. The best gift for us would be
that is
you and you sons Presence and celebrate this Diwali along with us.

I and whole family are counting reverse countdown for the day you are landing India and enjoy this Diwali with you. A
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
big
Thanks to you for all the happiness and support you gave me during my tough times in Canada.

Regards

Thanking you…….

Yours
Lovingly


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Vaibhav
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Mehta
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your English speaking friend who is visiting you soon and asking you what presents your family would like. Write - Who your family consists of - What kind of presents each member would like. - How you feel about your friend coming to visit

Letter
  American English
9 paragraphs
194 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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