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You recently attended a conference and would like to give a presentation to your colleagues about it

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Dear sir / madam. I hope so you are very well. Recently I attended a meeting which is a very beneficial for my colleagues and this topic will learn by new ideas to workers. I would like to write a letter about the topic. Violence is the main cause of our city. day by day violence are increasingly. Because I want to remove the violence in our city. we all together learning about the new presentation and take a action on the violence. In present. We are ready to take action and

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so
 you are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 well. Recently I attended a meeting which is a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 beneficial for my colleagues and this topic will learn by new This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtsconceptsnotions
ideas
 to workers. I would like to write a letter about the topic. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrampagedisturbancebrutalityclashconfusionassault
Violence
 is the main cause of our city. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterDay
day
 by day You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrampagedisturbancebrutalityclashconfusionassault
violence
 are increasingly
. “Because” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Because
 I want to remove the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrampagedisturbancebrutalityclashconfusionassault
violence
 in our city. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterWe
we
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violence
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