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you left some important documents at the hotel

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to let you know that I left my immigration documents in your hotel yesterday morning. As you know there was a meeting in the lobby of the hotel yesterday at 10: 30 AM. I think I left them on the red chair next to reception desk because I had to move my car between the meeting and forgot to take them. Those documents are very important for me and I have to give them to the embassy of Canada today before 3: 00 PM. My request is that you find my immigration documents and send them to me. I will write down my address details on the back of this letter. Please kindly contact me if you can not send them to me and I will receive them at the lobby myself today. Could you please follow up on my case as soon as possible. Thank you so much in advance. Yours sincerely, Kiarash Fadavi
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to
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you know that I
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my immigration documents in your hotel yesterday morning.

As you know there was a meeting in the lobby of the hotel yesterday at 10: 30 AM. I
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think
I
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left
them on the red chair
next
to reception desk
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I had to
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move
my car between the meeting and forgot to take them.

Those documents are
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important
for me and I
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have to
give them to the embassy of Canada
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today
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before
3: 00 PM.

My request is that you find my immigration documents and
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send
them to me.

I will write down my address
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details
on the back of this letter.

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kindly contact me if you can not
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send
them to me and I will receive them at the lobby myself
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today
.

Could you
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please
follow up on my case as
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soon
as possible.

Thank you
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much in advance.

Yours
sincerely
,

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IELTS letter you left some important documents at the hotel

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  American English
11 paragraphs
161 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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