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you left some important papers at the hotel

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to let you know that I left my immigration documents in your hotel yesterday morning. As you know there was a meeting in the lobby of the hotel yesterday at 10: 30 AM. I think I left them on the red chair next to reception desk because I had to move my car between the meeting and forgot to take them. Those documents are very important for me and I have to give them to the embassy of Canada today before 3: 00 PM. My request is that you find my immigration documents and send them to me. Could you please follow up on my case as soon as possible. Thank you so much in advance. Yours sincerely, Kiarash Fadavi
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to
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you know that I
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my immigration documents in your hotel yesterday morning.

As you know there was a meeting in the lobby of the hotel yesterday at 10: 30 AM. I
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think
I
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them on the red chair
next
to reception desk
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I had to
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move
my car between the meeting and forgot to take them.

Those documents are
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very
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important
for me and I
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have to
give them to the embassy of Canada
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today
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before
3: 00 PM.

My request is that you find my immigration documents and
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send
them to me.

Could you
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please
follow up on my case as
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soon
as possible.

Thank you
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much in advance.

Yours
sincerely
,

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IELTS letter you left some important papers at the hotel

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  American English
9 paragraphs
126 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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