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you organized a party for your company at a hotel

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing with regard to the goodbye party of our old colleague that my company held at your hotel last weekend. The event was great and it was for goodbye party of our old colleague. There were twenty-five members were invited. I am pleased to say that everything went according to plan and it was a memorable event. We were particularly impressed by the hotel personal, including waiters and member of the events team. The most important thing was the way that they were welcoming and friendly and at the end they gave us a gift that surprised us a lot. Perhaps I could make one or two suggestions for future events. First, if some fresh bouquet of flower is placed on the table, it feels good and shows you pay attention to detail. Second, if you have live music the environment will be much more pleasant. On behalf of all my colleagues, I would like to thank you and your Professional team for hosting such a special event. Yours Faithfully, Shima Karimi

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing with regard to the goodbye party of our This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 colleague that my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 held at your hotel last weekend.

The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionhappening
event
 was great and it was for goodbye party of our This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 colleague. There were twenty-five members were invited
. I am This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfied
pleased
 to say that everything went according to plan and it was a memorable This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionhappening
event
.

We were particularly
 impressed by the hotel personal, including waiters and member of the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionshappenings
events
 team. The most This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 thing was the way that they were welcoming and friendly and at the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 they gave us a gift that surprised us a lot.

Perhaps I could This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 one or two suggestions for future This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionshappenings
events
. First
, if This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 fresh Possible agreement error. The noun 'flower' seems to be countable; consider using: "bouquet of flowers".bouquet of flowers
bouquet of flower
is placed
 on the table, it feels This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratesportraysindicatesdisplays
shows
 you pay attention to detail. Second, if you have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 music the environment will be much more pleasant.

On behalf of all my colleagues, I would like to thank you and your Professional team for hosting such a special This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionhappening
event
.

Yours Faithfully
,

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