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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing with regard to the goodbye party of our old colleague that my company held at your hotel last weekend. The event was great and it was for goodbye party of our old colleague. There were twenty-five members were invited. I am pleased to say that everything went according to plan and it was a memorable event. We were particularly impressed by the hotel personal, including waiters and member of the events team. The most important thing was the way that they were welcoming and friendly and at the end they gave us a gift that surprised us a lot. Perhaps I could make one or two suggestions for future events. First, if some fresh bouquet of flower is placed on the table, it feels good and shows you pay attention to detail. Second, if you have live music the environment will be much more pleasant. On behalf of all my colleagues, I would like to thank you and your Professional team for hosting such a special event. Yours Faithfully, Shima Karimi
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing with regard to the goodbye party of our
old
colleague that my
company
held at your hotel last weekend.

The
event
was great and it was for goodbye party of our
old
colleague. There were twenty-five members
were invited
. I am
pleased
to say that everything went according to plan and it was a memorable
event
.

We were
particularly
impressed by the hotel personal, including waiters and member of the
events
team. The most
important
thing was the way that they were welcoming and friendly and at the
end
they gave us a gift that surprised us a lot.

Perhaps I could
make
one or two suggestions for future
events
.
First
, if
some
fresh
bouquet of flower
is placed
on the table, it feels
good
and
shows
you pay attention to detail. Second, if you have
live
music the environment will be much more pleasant.

On behalf of all my colleagues, I would like to thank you and your Professional team for hosting such a special
event
.

Yours
Faithfully
,

Shima
Karimi
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IELTS letter you organized a party for your company at a hotel

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8 paragraphs
177 words
6.5
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