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You are going to holiday. You need some information about the hotel. Write a letter to a hotel stuff.

You are going to holiday. You need some information about the hotel. Write a letter to a hotel stuff. 70bq5
Dear Sir, I am writing to as if you would be so kind as to give me some details about your hotel's accommondation. I would like to book a room for my family and it would be from the 11th of March until the 15th. On the 11th I may arrive late in the afternoon, and on the 15th if possible, I would like to have a late check-out at about 4 p. m. As we are two adults and a child I would like to book a one-bedroom suite, if possible. I would also prefer a non-smoking room as my daughter has allergies. Please, let me know how much it would be for the entire lengh of our stay and also whether the price includes anything extra like breakfast. I would also appreciate any information you can offer about places for sightseeing and leisure activities as we will be spending a few days in the town nearby. Thank you in advance for your kind coorparation. Yours faithfully.
Dear Sir, I am writing to as if you would be
so
kind as to give me
some
details
about your hotel's
accommondation
. I would like to book a room for my family and it would be from the 11th of March until the 15th. On the 11th I may arrive late in the afternoon, and on the 15th if possible, I would like to have a late
check
-out at about 4 p. m. As we are two adults and a child I would like to book a one-bedroom suite, if possible. I would
also
prefer a non-smoking room as my daughter has allergies.
Please
,
let
me know how much it would be for the entire
lengh
of our stay and
also
whether the price includes anything extra like breakfast. I would
also
appreciate any information you can offer about places for sightseeing and leisure activities as we will be spending a few days in the town nearby. Thank you in advance for your kind
coorparation
. Yours
faithfully
.
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IELTS letter You are going to holiday. You need some information about the hotel. Write a letter to a hotel stuff.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
168 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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