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You play sports (e.g. football) for a local team. You recently heard that a player in your team is in a hospital. Write a letter to your teammate. In your letter say how you feel about the news ask about the treatment in the hospital suggest some ways of cheering him/her up

You play sports (e. g. football) for a local team. You recently heard that a player in your team is in a hospital. Write a letter to your teammate. In your letter say how you feel about the news ask about the treatment in the hospital suggest some ways of cheering him/her up L0nV

Dear Tom, Your sister Anna told me yesterday that you had had an injury and had been sent to the medical centre. I am really very upset about knowing that your leg is broken. I could not even imagine that the fall you had during the training session may cause a broken leg. In your reply to me please tell me how you feel now, how your treatment is organised in the hospital. I want to know everything to be able to understand the seriousness of your injury. Please note that I and our football team players (almost all of them) are going to visit you in the hospital. I should have kept it a secret, but I am not able to do it. Hence, get ready to meet the team and have some fun time together. Looking forward to receiving your message very soon with a detailed description of your leg wellbeing. Regards, Marine

Dear Tom,

Your sister Anna This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :informed
told
 me yesterday that you had had an injury and had been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmitted
sent
 to the medical Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
. I am really
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 upset about knowing that your leg is broken
. I could not even imagine that the fall you had during the training session may cause a broken leg.

In your reply to me This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :inform
tell
 me how you feel This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
, how your treatment is Possible spelling mistake. 'organised' is British English.organized
organised
 in the hospital. I want to know everything to be able to understand the seriousness of your injury.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
 note that I and our football team players (almost all of them) are going to visit you in the hospital. I should have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retained
kept
 it a secret, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 I am not able to do it. Hence
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 ready to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 the team and have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 fun time together.

Looking forward to receiving your message This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 with a detailed description of your leg Possible spelling mistake found.well-beingwell being
wellbeing
.

Regards,

Marine