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You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn't able to play with you at the weekend. You decide to write to him in hospital, telling him about the match. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, tell him which team won describe the conditions on the day say how you felt about the match

You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn't able to play with you at the weekend. You decide to write to him in hospital, telling him about the match. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, tell him which team won describe the conditions on the day say how you felt about the match pPJw
Dear Drake, I am writing in a sorry state to tell you about the football match between our team and the Sunshine FC which you missed due to your accident. Our team fought till the 90th minutes to win the match for you. We were motivated with your absence and everyone decided to dedicate the win to you. It was a very difficult match for us as your absence was noticed. We had no one to play the Midfield role as you do which made our attack very slow. The team printed shirts with your picture and get well soon for all fans and every goal scored was jubilated with your ceremonial jubilation. The fans were all happy to see us win this for you and they ae all praying to see you back on the football field as soon as possible. Despite the weather we were able to put only two goals past their net. It rained for the last 30 minutes of the match. We could not score more goals as the field became muddy and slippery. In the beginning, I felt incomplete not having you around but the coach made me realize it should only prompt me to do more which is what can make you happy. I look forward to seeing you in the hospital when they start allowing visitors in but before then enjoy the pictures from the match which I have enclosed in the envelope. Every member of the team and fans send their regards and looking forward to your reply Bes
Dear Drake,

I am writing in a sorry state to
tell
you about the football
match
between our
team
and the Sunshine FC which you missed due to your accident.

Our
team
fought till the 90th minutes to win the
match
for you. We
were motivated
with your absence and everyone decided to dedicate the win to you. It was a
very
difficult
match
for us as your absence
was noticed
. We had no one to play the Midfield role as you do which made our attack
very
slow. The
team
printed shirts with your picture and
get
well
soon
for all fans and every goal scored was
jubilated
with your ceremonial jubilation. The fans were all happy to
see
us win this for you and they
ae
all praying to
see
you back on the football field as
soon
as possible.

Despite the weather we were able to put
only
two goals past their net. It rained for the last 30 minutes of the
match
. We could not score more goals as the field became muddy and slippery. In the beginning, I felt incomplete not having you around
but
the coach made me realize it should
only
prompt me to do more which is what can
make
you happy.

I look forward to seeing you in the hospital when they
start
allowing visitors in
but
before
then enjoy the pictures from the
match
which I have enclosed in the envelope. Every member of the
team
and fans
send
their regards and looking forward to your
reply


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IELTS letter You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn't able to play with you at the weekend. You decide to write to him in hospital, telling him about the match. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, tell him which team won describe the conditions on the day say how you felt about the match

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