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You participated in a sports event as a team member in foreign country Now you have come back to your home country and you want to recommend the same activity to your friend write a letter to your friend In your letter describe the activities you did ther

You participated in a sports event as a team member in foreign country Now you have come back to your home country and you want to recommend the same activity to your friend write a letter to your friend In your letter describe the activities you did ther PVk2B
Dear Samir, I hope this letter finds you in the best of your health and spirit. You know that, I have taken part in a cricket tournament last year in Delhi. It was great experience by evolving that event, I have played as wicket keeping batsman. I enjoyed lot in practice session and improved my bating techniques. I want you to also take part in that event that are again going to organize in next month as you are a fond of cricket and a good bowler as well. Organizers will provide you the cricketing kit and a free of cost practice session with international experts. This tournament will enhance your cricket in terms of temperament. Moreover, you will learn ball swinging techniques that will improve you bowling at death overs that will open a door for national team for you. If you need further assistance for participation formalities contact me on my mobile Yours, Piyush
Dear Samir,

I hope this letter finds you in the best of your health and spirit. You know that, I have taken part in a cricket tournament last year in Delhi. It was great experience by evolving that
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event
, I have played as
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wicket keeping
batsman. I enjoyed lot in practice session and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improved
my bating techniques.

I want you to
also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
take part
in that
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
event
that are again going to organize in
next
month as you are a fond of cricket and a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
bowler
as well
. Organizers will provide you the cricketing kit and a free of cost practice session with international experts.

This tournament will enhance your cricket in terms of temperament.
Moreover
, you will learn ball swinging techniques that will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
you bowling at death overs that will open a door for national team for you.

If you need
further
assistance for participation formalities contact me on my mobile

Yours,

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Piyush

IELTS letter You participated in a sports event as a team member in foreign country Now you have come back to your home country and you want to recommend the same activity to your friend write a letter to your friend In your letter describe the activities you did ther

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