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The children of your neighbor have spoilt your garden Write a letter to your neighbor requesting him to ask his her children not to spoil your garden

The children of your neighbor have spoilt your garden Write a letter to your neighbor requesting him to ask his her children not to spoil your garden g5q9g

Dear Mr. Moore, I am writing to inform you about my garden which is ruined by your children. In last week, I along with my family went to our relatives due to long holidays. When I returned back to home, I noticed that my garden was entirely spoiled. I checked CCTV footage and found that your children kept coming for two days in my garden and played there for longer hours. Actually, the boundary wall of my garden is very small from east side and it is convenient for children to enter in the garden through that wall. As I am fond of gardening, I had planted several flowers there. Your sons played football inside. On the second day, they brought two more children from the street and they plucked many flowers. I would request you to tell your children not to do the same again otherwise I have to complain it to the local council. Anticipating this situation will not occur in the future. Yours sincerely, Patrick Smith.

Dear Mr. Moore,

I am writing to inform you about my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbedfieldnurseryterracepatiogreenhouse
garden
 which is ruined
 by your children.

In last week, I along with my family went to our relatives due to long holidays. When I Consider using "returned".returned
returned back
 to home, I noticed that my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbedfieldnurseryterracepatiogreenhouse
garden
 was entirely
 spoiled. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitored
checked
 CCTV footage and found that your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinfanttoddleradolescentjuvenileyouthteenager
children
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retained
kept
 coming for two days in my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbedfieldnurseryterracepatiogreenhouse
garden
 and played there for longer hours. Actually, the boundary wall of my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbedfieldnurseryterracepatiogreenhouse
garden
 is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 from east side and it is convenient for You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinfanttoddleradolescentjuvenileyouthteenager
children
 to enter in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbedfieldnurseryterracepatiogreenhouse
garden
 through that wall.

As I am fond of gardening, I had planted several flowers there. Your sons played football inside. On the second day, they brought two more You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinfanttoddleradolescentjuvenileyouthteenager
children
 from the Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).street, and
street and
 they plucked This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 flowers.

I would request you to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :inform
tell
 your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinfanttoddleradolescentjuvenileyouthteenager
children
 not to do the same again otherwise
 I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 complain it to the local council.

Anticipating this situation will not occur in the future.

Yours sincerely
,

Patrick Smith. 