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You are due to start a new job next week but you will not be able to because you have some problems

You are due to start a new job next week but you will not be able to because you have some problems XGlEq

Dear Sir/Madam, I was selected for the Analyst Position in your organisation and my joining date is 21st of April. However, I regret to inform you that it would not be possible for me to join on 21st. There has been some medical emergency in my family and I have to attend to my family member. Due to the situation, I have to spend hours in the hospital. As per the doctors, as the patient needs monitoring, he has to stay at the hospital for more ten days. Hence, it seems that it is unlikely that i would be able to start the job the following week. As per the doctor's, the patient will be able to get discharged from the hospital on 22nd. So, I believe, I will be able to start the job from 23rd April. Please let me know if it is possible for me to join from 23rd. Please let me know your thoughts. Yours faithfully,

Dear Sir/Madam,

I was selected
 for the Analyst Position in your Possible spelling mistake. 'organisation' is British English.organization
organisation
 and my joining date is 21st of April.

However
, I regret to inform you that it would not be possible for me to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatefuse
join
 on 21st.

There has been This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 medical emergency in my family and I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 attend to my family member.

Due to the situation, I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 spend hours in the hospital. As per the doctors, as the patient needs monitoring, he This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:oughts to
has to
 stay at the hospital for more ten days.

Hence
, it seems that it is unlikely that Did you mean "I"?I
i
 would be able to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 the job the following week.

As per the doctor's, the patient will be able to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 discharged from the hospital on 22nd. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
, I believe, I will be able to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 the job from 23rd April.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 me know if it is possible for me to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatefuse
join
 from 23rd. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 me know your thoughts.

Yours faithfully
, 