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You organised a party for the 90th birthday of a relative in a hotel. Many elderly guests attended the party and it was a huge success. Write a letter to thank the hotel manager. In your letter, give the details of the party give the reason why the party was so successful mention the things that helped with special mention to specific hotel staff

Dear Manager, I am writing this letter to express my gratitude for the successfull event organized by your hotel, the Grand Residency, on the account of my granadmother's 90th birthday on last week. The event has left an everlasting impression on almost every person's mind who were attended. Especially, my grandfather as he was pleasantly surprised to experience the heart touching arrangements as well as decoration on the stage. The party hall was easily accessible for aged people; especially, those who are using wheelchair. That was one of the remarkabale arrangement you have made. Moreover, all the guests were praised the food quality and deliciousness in each and every bite. I would like to appraise you about Mr. Thomas, your staff member, who was looking after my grandfather and his friends. Also, he was so humble to server all requests made by the guests. I believe he deserves an appreciation for his commitment towards work. Definitly, I will reccommend this hotel to my friends and family for upcoming events. Wishing you all the best for your future events. Warm regards, Tony
Dear Manager,

I am writing this letter to express my gratitude for the
successfull
event
organized by your hotel, the Grand Residency, on the account of my
granadmother
's 90th birthday on last week.

The
event
has
left
an everlasting impression on almost every person's mind who
were attended
.
Especially
, my grandfather as he was
pleasantly
surprised to experience

the
heart touching arrangements
as well
as decoration on the stage. The party hall was
easily
accessible for aged
people
;
especially
, those who are using wheelchair. That was one of the
remarkabale


arrangement you have made.

Moreover
, all the guests
were praised
the food quality and deliciousness in each and every bite. I would like to appraise you about Mr. Thomas, your staff member, who was looking after
my


grandfather
and his friends.
Also
, he was
so
humble to server all requests made by the guests. I believe he deserves an appreciation for his commitment towards work.

Definitly
, I will
reccommend
this hotel to my friends and family for upcoming
events
. Wishing you all the best for your future
events
.

Warm regards,

Tony
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IELTS letter You organised a party for the 90th birthday of a relative in a hotel. Many elderly guests attended the party and it was a huge success. Write a letter to thank the hotel manager. In your letter, give the details of the party give the reason why the party was so successful mention the things that helped with special mention to specific hotel staff

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  American English
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180 words
6.0
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