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You organised a party for the 90th birthday of a relative in a hotel. Many elderly guests attended the party and it was a huge success. Write a letter to thank the hotel manager. In your letter, give the details of the party give the reason why the party was so successful mention the things that helped with special mention to specific hotel staff

Greetings! This letter is exclusively written to express gratitude for the successful event organized by your hotel, the Park Plaza, on account of my grandmother’s 90th birthday on 1st November. Initially, we have asked you to make an arrangement for 100 people. It was a commendable job done by your staff to accommodate 20 more people who were not on the list. The gourmet food was served and everyone was so delighted seeing such an exceptional arrangement. My grandmother was over the moon and she really enjoyed every moment of this special day. The people in the party sway to the rhythms of DJ music even grandmother danced for a while as well. I would like to appraise you about Mrs. Kattie, your staff member, who was looking after my grandmother and her friends. She was so humble to serve all requests made by grandmother. I believe she deserves appreciation for her great work. Wishing you the best of luck for future events. Warm regards, John Smith.

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event
 organized by your hotel, the Park Plaza, on account of my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmatriarchancestorgrannygrandma
grandmother’s
 90th birthday on 1st November.

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, we have asked you to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 an arrangement for 100 This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
. It was a commendable job done by your staff to accommodate 20 more This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 who were not on the list. The gourmet food was served
 and everyone was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 delighted seeing such an exceptional arrangement. My You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmatriarchancestorgrannygrandma
grandmother
 was over the Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).moon, and
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 she really
 enjoyed every moment of this special day. The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 in the party sway to the rhythms of DJ music even You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmatriarchancestorgrannygrandma
grandmother
 danced for a while as well
.

I would like to appraise you about Mrs. Possible spelling mistake found.KatieKathieMattieHattieTattiePattie
Kattie
, your staff member, who was looking after my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmatriarchancestorgrannygrandma
grandmother
 and her friends. She was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 humble to serve all requests made by You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmatriarchancestorgrannygrandma
grandmother
. I believe she deserves appreciation for her great work.

Wishing you the best of luck for future This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionshappenings
events
.

Warm regards,

John Smith. 