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A friend from another country is moving to your city for work. He / she has asked you for advice about living in your city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • suggest an interesting part of the city to live in • describe the public transport in your city • say how your friend can meet new people there

I am glad to hear you after a long time. I hope you are in pink of your health. I am writing this letter in regards with advice to stay in my city. I am pleased to hear that you are planning to shift in my city because of your job transfer. You visited my home most often so that you not unaware about this city. Though I want to recommend you places which are most mesmerize as well as convenient to stay. First area is the station road which is posh area of city and another one is dhamdod road which is an outskirt place. Both the places have adequate transport facilities at round clock which are the essential thing for any place to live. Hence, you can book home in either of area without getting tensed. Furthermore, it is inevitable to brief you about refreshment activities held in clubs and town hall which provide relaxation from routine work excursion. Many indoor games are organized for instance table tennis, treasure hunt in which you have an opportunity to interacts with new person as well as you rejuvenate you mind. I hope this information makes you strong and firm to live in this city. If any help is needed then feel free to contact me. Anyway I can’t wait to meet you.
I am glad to hear you after a long time. I hope you are in pink of your health.
I
am writing this letter in regards with advice to stay in my city.

I
am
pleased
to hear that you are planning to shift in my city
because
of your job transfer. You visited my home most
often
so
that
you not
unaware about this city.
Though
I want to recommend you places which are most mesmerize
as well
as convenient to stay.
First
area is the station road which is posh area of city and another one is
dhamdod
road which is an outskirt place.

Both the places have adequate transport facilities at round clock which are the essential thing for any place to
live
.
Hence
, you can book home in either of area without getting tensed.

Furthermore
, it is inevitable to brief you about refreshment activities held in clubs and town hall which provide relaxation from routine work excursion.
Many
indoor games
are organized
for instance
table tennis, treasure hunt in which you have an opportunity to interacts with new person
as well
as you rejuvenate you mind.

I hope this information
makes
you strong and firm to
live
in this city. If any
help
is needed
then feel free to contact me. Anyway I can’t wait to
meet
you.
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IELTS letter A friend from another country is moving to your city for work. He / she has asked you for advice about living in your city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • suggest an interesting part of the city to live in • describe the public transport in your city • say how your friend can meet new people there

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
222 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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