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You ordered a book online for exam preparation. It has been some time since you ordered it and you still have not received your book. Write a letter to the e-commerce company about this. ■ describe your purchase order of the book ■ explain the importance of the book ■ say what you want the company to do for you.

You ordered a book online for exam preparation. It has been some time since you ordered it and you still have not received your book. Write a letter to the e-commerce company about this. ■ describe your purchase order of the book ■ explain the importance of the book ■ say what you want the company to do for you. DJlj
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to complain about my order of a book from your company on 1st April which has not arrived. My order number is AZ435636 and it was for a book entitled “General Studies Manual” by Manohar Sharma. It was the one which came with a CD and was priced at £15. 99. The delivery was guaranteed to be only two days but so far I have waited nearly 2 weeks without receiving anything. This book is essential to my studies in preparing for my IAS exam, which is only 1 week away. It is the only book that explains some key aspects of the exam and without it I will struggle to get the grades I need for my future goals. If your company is unable to deliver the book within the next two days, I would like a full refund including the delivery costs. I hope to hear from you on receipt of this letter as this situation must be urgently resolved. Yours faithfully, Sam Smith
Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to complain about my order of a
book
from your
company
on 1st April which has not arrived.

My order number is AZ435636 and it was for a
book
entitled “General Studies Manual” by
Manohar
Sharma. It was the one which came with a CD and
was priced
at £15. 99. The delivery
was guaranteed
to be
only
two days
but
so
far I have waited
nearly
2 weeks without receiving anything.

This
book
is essential to my studies in preparing for my IAS exam, which is
only
1 week away. It is the
only
book
that
explains
some
key aspects of the exam and without
it
I will struggle to
get
the grades I need for my future goals.

If your
company
is unable to deliver the
book
within the
next
two days, I would like a full refund including the delivery costs.

I hope to hear from you on receipt of this letter as this situation
must
be
urgently
resolved.

Yours
faithfully
, Sam Smith
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IELTS letter You ordered a book online for exam preparation. It has been some time since you ordered it and you still have not received your book. Write a letter to the e-commerce company about this. ■ describe your purchase order of the book ■ explain the importance of the book ■ say what you want the company to do for you.

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