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you order a wardrobe when it arrived one door was missing. write letter to company to replace it with new one

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Dear Sir I am writing this letter to complain about the wardrobe that I have bought from your prominent company. I purchased wardrobe online on the 23rd July. About wardrobe specification, it is wooden piece, brown colour, double door and three shelves in it. I am excited about the closet, when I have placed this order. Unfortunately, I got disappointed when it arrived. Actually, one door of this particular item was missing. It is hardly to imagine that irresponsibility in delivering the toggery from renowned company like yours. Now, I would like to replace this piece of furniture with new ones. It would be kind act, if you could send your staff to collect this wardrobe and exchange it with a new one. Due to my hectic schedule, I will be available from next week in the afternoon at home. I hope you would consider my situation and take prompt action against the involve employees. So that it will no be happening in the future. Yours sincerely Kiranprit Kaur
Dear Sir

I am writing this letter to complain about the
wardrobe
that I have
bought
from your prominent
company
. I
purchased
wardrobe
online on the 23rd July.

About
wardrobe
specification, it is wooden piece, brown
colour
, double door and three shelves in it. I
am excited
about the closet, when I have placed this order. Unfortunately, I
got
disappointed when it arrived. Actually, one door of this particular item was missing. It is hardly to imagine that irresponsibility in delivering the
toggery
from renowned
company
like yours.
Now
, I would like to replace this piece of furniture with new ones. It would be kind act, if you could
send
your staff to collect this
wardrobe
and exchange it with a new one. Due to my hectic schedule, I will be available from
next
week in the afternoon at home.

I hope you would consider my situation and take prompt action against
the involve
employees.
So that
it will
no
be happening in the future.

Yours
sincerely


Kiranprit
Kaur
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IELTS letter you order a wardrobe when it arrived one door was missing. write letter to company to replace it with new one

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
168 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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