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You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant and you were pleased with their service.

You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant and you were pleased with their service. 15bEL
Dear Sir/ Madam, I am writing this letter to give a detailed feedback of my experience at your restaurant in Lagos. I visited your restaurant the one at the Ikeja branch on monday 20th of June 2019 with a couple of friends in the afternoon. We ordered from the intercontinental dish menu and also got some drinks alongside to go with the meal. I was there to celebrate my husband's new business car and also to meet up with old friends we had not seen in ages. Interestingly, despite the negative reviews on your online page I was surprised about how tasty and neatly plated the food was. Your staff were courteous and attended to us without delay. What really blew me off my seat was how quiet the environment was despite being located in a noisy neighbourhood. Thank you for the wonderful and top notch experience. Yours faithfully, Opeyemi.
Dear Sir/ Madam,

I am writing this letter to give a detailed feedback of my experience at your restaurant in Lagos.

I visited your restaurant the one at the
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Ikeja
branch on
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monday
20th of June 2019 with a couple of friends in the afternoon. We ordered from the intercontinental dish menu and
also
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got
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some
drinks alongside to
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go with
the meal.

I was there to celebrate my husband's new business car and
also
to
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meet
up with
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old
friends we had not
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seen
in ages.

Interestingly
, despite the
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negative
reviews on your online page I
was surprised
about how tasty and
neatly
plated the food was. Your staff were courteous and attended to us without delay. What
really
blew me off my seat was how quiet the environment was despite
being located
in a noisy
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neighbourhood
.

Thank you for the wonderful and
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top notch
experience.

Yours
faithfully
,

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Opeyemi
.

IELTS letter You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant and you were pleased with their service.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
150 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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