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You need to take some time off of work to go on holiday. Write a letter to your direct manager. In your letter: Ask for time off and explain why Provide the dates and times for which you will be unavailable to work Describe what you will do to prepare or make up for your absence Write at least 150 words. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Ms. Snyder,

You need to take some time off of work to go on holiday. Write a letter to your direct manager. In your letter: Ask for time off and explain why Provide the dates and times for which you will be unavailable to work Describe what you will do to prepare or make up for your absence Begin your letter as follows: Dear Ms. Snyder, qJ2r
Dear Ms. Snyder, I am writing this letter for requesting you to give me leave from work to went on vacations. I want to take break from work as we are planning to visit my home country with family. This trip has been planned from 16th of march to 30th of march. I will be back to work on April Ist. As you know that i am very serious about my work and never took any holiday or day off during my work but this time there is some emergency due to that i have to take time off. I will ensure that my absence would not affect any delay in work which i have to do during that time. Moreover, All my colleagues are ready to help me by covering my work and i would also assist them online. In addition, when i will be back, i will definitely do overtime if there is any pending work. I would be most grateful if you could grant me leave from work. i look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, John
Dear Ms. Snyder,

I am writing this letter for requesting you to give me
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to went on vacations.

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as we are planning to visit my home country with family. This trip has
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from 16th of march to 30th of march. I will be back to
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on April
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I will ensure that my absence would not affect any delay in
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which
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do during that time.
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and
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would
also
assist them online.
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will definitely do overtime if there is any pending work.

I would be most grateful if you could grant me
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.
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look forward to hearing from you.

Yours
sincerely
,

John

IELTS letter You need to take some time off of work to go on holiday. Write a letter to your direct manager. In your letter: Ask for time off and explain why Provide the dates and times for which you will be unavailable to work Describe what you will do to prepare or make up for your absence Begin your letter as follows: Dear Ms. Snyder,

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180 words
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