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Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course. Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter explain why you are writing describe your circumstances ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course

Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course. Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter explain why you are writing describe your circumstances ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course kPdN

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to express my great interest in enrolling the computer course in Simon Fraser University although I haven't complete an elementary course. In this letter, I will explain why. I understand that this is an advanced course, and it is designed for people who have complteted an elementary course. However, I have been always interested in studying computer as it's an essential skill to have nowadays. I have been watching videos online to learn the basic skills and practicing by using Java program. I kindly ask for a special exception for me so I can enroll in this course. Becuase I have been self-studying for 12 months, and I know how to build a simple website by using Java. On the other hand, I beleive I can catch up on the course since I am planning to be a full-time student. Thank you in advance for your assistance, and look forward to hearing back from you. Warm Regards, Annabel

Dear Sir or Madam,

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course
 in Simon Fraser University although I haven't complete an elementary You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentseriessystemprogramplanway
course
. In this letter, I will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :interpret
explain
 why.

I understand that this is an advanced You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentseriessystemprogramplanway
course
, and it is designed
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 an elementary You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentseriessystemprogramplanway
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. However
, I The adverb 'always' is usually put between 'have' and 'been'.have always been
have been always
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skill
 to have nowadays. I have been watching videos online to learn the basic This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
 and practicing by using Java program.

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ask for
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so
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course
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, I Possible spelling mistake found.believebehave
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 I can catch up on the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentseriessystemprogramplanway
course
 since I am planning to be a full-time student.

Thank you in advance for your assistance, and look forward to hearing back from you.

Warm Regards,

Annabel