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You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course.

You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. OkAy

Dear Mr Smith, I am Anmol from your evening virtual training course. I am writing in regards to quit my classes for now. I am working in a restaurant in customer service and due to this pandemic going on, my shifts were cut down but as everything is opening again, I need to go there own daily basics. My schedule will go to be very busy and I barely have time to relax and doing leisure activities as well. I would have no time for this course despite the fact that I genuinely worked hard on it during the whole summer. Not only this, I am not financially stable to afford the fees and buy some books. I am thinking to quit it for a very short term and would like to rejoin it next summer. I hope I will get the funds back which was collected to go on the class trip because it is hard for me to go there. Looking for your response. Yours Sincerely, Anmolpreeet

Dear Mr Smith,

I am Possible spelling mistake found.AnimalAngelAngloArmorAOLAmos
Anmol
 from your evening virtual training course. I am writing Use "in regard to", "with regard to", or more simply "regarding".in regard towith regard toregarding
in regards to
 quit my classes for This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 am working in a restaurant in customer service and due to this pandemic going on, my shifts were This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :minimize
cut
 down This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
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own
 daily basics.

My schedule will go to be This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 busy and I barely
 have time to relax and doing leisure activities as well
. I would have no time for this course despite the fact that I genuinely
 worked This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 on it during the whole summer. Not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 this, I am not financially
 stable to afford the fees and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 books.

I am thinking to quit it for a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 short term and would like to rejoin it next
 summer. I hope I will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 the funds back which was collected
 to go on the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
 trip This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 for me to go there.

Looking for your response.

Yours Sincerely
,

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Anmolpreeet