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You are looking for a part-time job at a football club. Write a letter to the manager of the football club. In your letter, • introduce yourself • explain what experience and special skills you have • tell him/her when you think you could start

You are looking for a part-time job at a football club. Write a letter to the manager of the football club. In your letter, • introduce yourself • explain what experience and special skills you have • tell him/her when you think you could start bMnW

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing in reference to an advertisement of job which was published on 22 November in Hamilton newspaper. My name is Dave, and I am 28 years old, I have completed my course regarding “Health & witness” from Mohawk university. During my college days, I was the captain of my football team, thus I pose intermediate knowledge about this sport as well as experience. I have learnt that you are looking for coach assistant for your club, and I am immensely keen to join your staff as a part time assistant coach. As I mentioned earlier, I am also a football player. I played the FIFA world cup in last year, as team member of UFC club, but due to my heart disease my doctor suggested me to take leave from game for 2 years. I met all the terms and requirements as mentioned in the job advertisement, so I consider myself a perfect individual for this job due to the fact that I was a professional player, and I can teach your club members a number of skills. I can start from the next week if you would like to arrange an interview then I am available on 22 and 23 November from 8: 00 a. m. to 5: 00 p. m. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Dave Batista

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing in reference to an The usual collocation for "advertisement" is "for" not "of". Did you mean "advertisement for"?advertisement for
advertisement of
 job which was published
 on 22 November in Hamilton newspaper.

My name is Dave, and I am 28 years This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
, I have completed my course regarding “Health & witness” from Mohawk university. During my college days, I was the captain of my football team, thus
 I pose intermediate knowledge about this sport as well
 as experience.

I have Possible spelling mistake. 'learnt' is British English.learned
learnt
 that you are looking for coach assistant for your club, and I am immensely
 keen to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatefuse
join
 your staff as a This word is normally spelled with hyphen.part-time
part time
 assistant coach. As I mentioned earlier, I am also
 a football player. I played the If the term is a proper noun, use initial capitals.FIFA World Cup
FIFA world cup
 in last year, as team member of UFC club, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 due to my heart disease my doctor suggested me to take This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :depart
leave
 from game for 2 years.

I met all the terms and requirements as mentioned in the job advertisement, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I consider myself a perfect individual for this job due to the fact that I was a professional player, and I can teach your club members a number of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 from the next
 week if you would like to arrange an interview then I am available on 22 and 23 November from 8: 00 a. m. to 5: 00 p. m.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 look forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully
,

Dave Batista