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You need to organize an office event in a community center. Write a letter to the center. In your letter

You need to organize an office event in a community center. Write a letter to the center. In your letter BJwqX

Dear Sir or Madam, I belong to the ABC technology company where we develop new softwares for banks. In the upcoming Women's day, we plan to organize a self-defence training session for our staff on 8th March 2020. It will be an open to all invite and we are restricting ourselves to 150 participants only on a first-cum-first-serve basis. We have an external speaker who would also conduct the training. The session will be conducted for four hours, which would then be followed on by lunch. We would need approx. 175 chairs in a hall, some soft mats placed on the ground and mic and speaker facilities. Request you to provide the following information to us: 1. ) Conference centre availability on 8th March? 2. ) Capacity of the centre? 3. ) Provision of lunch buffet for the staff? 4. ) Charges for the entire event? Would appreciate to hear back from you as soon as possible. Thank You

Dear Sir or Madam,

I belong to the ABC technology This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 where we develop new Possible spelling mistake found.softwaresoft wares
softwares
 for banks. In the upcoming Women's day, we plan to organize a Possible spelling mistake. 'self-defence' is British English.self-defense
self-defence
 training session for our staff on 8th March 2020.

It will be an open to all Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).invite, and
invite and
 we are restricting ourselves to 150 participants This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 on a first
-cum-first
-serve basis. We have an external speaker who would also
 conduct the training. The session will be conducted
 for four hours, which would then be followed
 on by lunch. We would need approx. 175 chairs in a hall, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 soft mats placed on the ground and mic and speaker facilities.

Request you to provide the following information to us:

1. Loose punctuation mark.apply
)
 Conference Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
 availability on 8th March?

2. Loose punctuation mark.apply
)
 Capacity of the Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
?

3. Loose punctuation mark.apply
)
 Provision of lunch buffet for the staff?

4. Loose punctuation mark.apply
)
 Charges for the entire This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionhappening
event
?

Would The verb 'appreciate' is used with the gerund form: "appreciate hearing".appreciate hearing
appreciate to hear
 back from you as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as possible.

Thank You