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A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/she has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday describe some possible disadvantages say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer

A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/she has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday describe some possible disadvantages say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer mNwN
Dear Ella, I’m really glad to hear from you and pleased to know that you finally have time to take a break and that you’ve decided to go camping in Uludag, Turkey this summer! I’ve not really spent a lot of time camping in the last few years due to being terribly busy with school, but I recall enjoying it immensely when I did have the time. It’s a nice way to unwind after a hectic week/month/year as well as connect with nature. However, you will find that the national park of Uludag does not have well-maintained and appropriately marked hiking trails, so that might defeat the purpose of going there. I would also suggest you to keep your trip short as camping is not everyone’s cup of tea and city girls like you and me might find it difficult to survive that long in the wild, without access to facilities we are used to. I have such fond memories of our last hiking trip together, and I would absolutely love to accompany you on this trip. Perhaps we could also invite Jason and Noah and make this a double-date. Let me know what you think! Lots of love, Riri
Dear Ella,

I’m
really
glad to hear from you and
pleased
to know that you
finally
have time to take a break and that you’ve decided to go camping in
Uludag
, Turkey this summer!

I’ve not
really
spent
a lot of
time camping in the last few years due to being
terribly
busy with school,
but
I recall enjoying it
immensely
when I did have the time. It’s a nice way to unwind after a hectic week/month/year
as well
as connect with nature.
However
, you will find that the national park of
Uludag
does not have well-maintained and
appropriately
marked hiking trails,
so
that might defeat the purpose of going there. I would
also
suggest you to
keep
your trip short as camping is not everyone’s cup of tea and city girls like you and me might find it difficult to survive that long in the wild, without access to facilities we are
used
to.

I have such fond memories of our last hiking trip together, and I would
absolutely
love
to accompany you on this trip. Perhaps we could
also
invite Jason and Noah and
make
this a double-date.
Let
me know what you
think
!

Lots of
love
,

Riri
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IELTS letter A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/she has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday describe some possible disadvantages say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
199 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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