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You recently stayed in a hotel in a large city. The weather was very unusual for the time of year and the heating / cooling system in the hotel was quite inadequate. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: give details of what went wrong explain what you had to do to overcome the problem at the time say what action you would like the manager to take You do NOT need to write your own address. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ..., You should write at least 150 words.

You recently stayed in a hotel in a large city. The weather was very unusual for the time of year and the heating / cooling system in the hotel was quite inadequate. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: give details of what went wrong explain what you had to do to overcome the problem at the time say what action you would like the manager to take You do NOT need to write your own address. Begin your letter as follows: Dear. . . , KR2N
Dear manager, My name is Anne Hansen and I recently stayed in your hotel during my work visit to Calgary from February 20th to 23th of February. I am writing to report a problem that I experienced during my stay. The weather in Calgary at the time of my stay was very cold because of heavy snowfall. The average temperature, according to the weather report, was -30 degrees celsius. I felt cold in my room because the heating system of my room is not working properly or not setup properly. I reported the problem to the front desk staff, the lady at reception said they cannot do anything because they do not have any technician to fix that. After that, I ask them to give me an extra blanket because it's already late at night and I am not able to go anywhere else. I want you to give me a free stay at your hotel during my next visit because of the convenience I have during my stay. moreover, I would highly suggest you arrange for the technician to fix the heating system. Yours sincerely anne Task 2 Question
Dear manager,

My name is Anne Hansen and I recently stayed in your hotel during my work visit to Calgary from February 20th to
23th
of February. I am writing to report a problem that I experienced during my stay.

The weather in Calgary at the time of my stay was
very
cold
because
of heavy snowfall. The average temperature, according to the weather report, was -30 degrees
celsius
. I felt
cold
in my room
because
the heating system of my room is not working
properly
or not setup
properly
. I reported the problem to the front desk staff, the lady at reception said they cannot do anything
because
they do not have any technician to
fix
that. After that, I ask them to give me an extra blanket
because
it's already late at
night and
I am not able to go anywhere else.

I want you to give me a free stay at your hotel during my
next
visit
because
of the convenience I have during my stay.
moreover
, I would
highly
suggest you arrange for the technician to
fix
the heating system.

Yours
sincerely


anne


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IELTS letter You recently stayed in a hotel in a large city. The weather was very unusual for the time of year and the heating / cooling system in the hotel was quite inadequate. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: give details of what went wrong explain what you had to do to overcome the problem at the time say what action you would like the manager to take You do NOT need to write your own address. Begin your letter as follows: Dear. . . ,

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  American English
7 paragraphs
189 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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